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The Dennison House – (Chapter: Just the Beginning…)
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I evaded Glen’s questions. Not that I necessarily knew the answers anyway. But the last thing I wanted to do was say the wrong thing and put Ashley’s potential freedom to see her daughter in jeopardy. It wasn’t my place, nor was it a mistake that I felt could be forgiven.
When I told Ashley the news, naturally she was in shock. She couldn’t believe she was actually going to be face-to-face with Maggie after all this time, after all this waiting and wanting. But if everything went according to plan, by this time tomorrow she would be reunited with her daughter, Glen would recognize fully the error of his ways, and we could all move on with our completely sorted lives.
Or so I hoped.
“I don’t know what to wear,” Ashley said, rifling through her suitcase.
“Do you think she cares, Ash? I mean, she’s a kid. Do kids even pay attention to stuff like that?”
“I know. You’re right. But I need something to freak out about, ok?”
“Why?”
“Why? Because if I freaked out about what I should actually be freaking about—which is seeing my daughter—then I would lose it. Like, that would be too much. So instead I’m going to focus my energy on something that doesn’t really matter.”
“Well,” I said, watching her from my reclining position on the hotel bed, “you could always focus your energy on me.”
She smiled, “But you kind of matter a little bit.”
“How much?” I ask, raising my eyebrows.
“A little bit. I’d say probably…this much,” she replies, spacing her fingers a centimeter apart.
“Wow, I’m starting to really grow on you, huh?”
“Absolutely.”
“Prove it.”
“Prove it?”
“Come here,” I said, gesturing towards the empty space next to me.
She walked on her knees across the bed until she was pressed against my left side, “Now what?”
I pulled her down on top of me, crashing her lips into my waiting ones and seeking her tongue again and again. It had been way too long since I had felt the welcomed pressure of her body on mine. And with hours to spare and everything falling into place, I could think of nothing more appropriate than showing her—physically—how much I loved her.
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shit wow i so didn’t see that coming but haha i guess i should of gotten used to that because all your stories throw the unexpected. you think you know what’s gonna happen and your thrown into a tailspin. can’t wait for the sequel. great update even though it makes me want to ring ashleys neck.pms!!!
BAHHHHHH?!#%^*%*!….. kill the bitch.
my mouth is agape right now….seriously. jesus, I didn’t even see it coming. how long did Kyla know this? oh man. super super good.
Okay so I nearly passed out from not breathing, but it’s all good. Seriously though that was awesome!
you just lyk flipped my brain over definately didnt see dat comin!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG !!!!!!! i so did not c that comin im so stunned why would ashley do it i never thought i could but i hate ash soo mucg right now :(
oh. my. god. yea so didn’t see that one coming. wow. and here i was thinking that maybe aiden had kidnapped them or something…. man i can’t wait for the sequel!
…*crickets*…WOAH. that was…crazzzy. Very nice (;
never thought id say it but KILL THE BITCHES!!!
ok i’ve been a lurker for a long while. but damn, this finale finally requires a comment out of me. anyways… that was pure epicness. you sure know how to tell a story and twist things around. grace us with the sequal a-sap. we’re hooked now.
WOW so didn’t see that one coming love your stories don’t stop
man wow god im like i dont know what to say i didnt see any of that coming you know i guess thats why ashley got got mad aiden raped her becouse hes with her but damn thats just fucked up i cant wait till the follow up sequel man id tell the cops first and then fucking kill them i dont know id do something fucking basterds i thought maybe aiden took ashley and her daughter but fuck thats crazy pms please
talk about a fucking twist, props though it just came out of nowhere, cant wait for the follow up and of course civil union!
OMG…thanks alot…I was really hopin that you wouldnt do that, I mean I had the suspected it but i didnt want it to be true. Damn great story, LOVE IT n I love all your stories so keep em comin’ :)
damn it. I’m so mad… I’m over come with rage RAARR. I’m rereading the last part. I can’t believe it!!!
DuDe! that was so totally amazing!! WoW!Ashley .. i just got so disappointed =/Buuuuut i’ll be around waiting for the new story!
that… i…. they… *deep breath* okay… lets try that again… that was so intense! i cannot believe that happened!!! all the lies and deception… i’m depressed hahaha! you’re an amazing writer and i cannot wait for the sequel to this story! in fact i might go a little crazy until i find out how it’s going to play out… thanks for writing, it
that… i…. they… *deep breath* okay… lets try that again… that was so intense! i cannot believe that happened!!! all the lies and deception… i’m depressed hahaha! you’re an amazing writer and i cannot wait for the sequel to this story! in fact i might go a little crazy until i find out how it’s going to play out… thanks for writing, it
i somehow sent my message before i was done (twice haha)… i was just gonna say thanks for writing, it’s a joy to read!
Omg! I kinda hate you right now, hmpf. Okay so I don’t really hate you. How could I when you’re such an incredible writer. I cannot wait for the follow-up. This was an amazing story and I loved it.
What the fuckkkk man. That’s….that’s whack fo sho. I’m like in awe haha. Friggen A! I hope this isn’t true or I’ll choke Ashley haha. Fuck this is crazy man. Well I LOVED this story and I can not wait until the sequel AHHHH!!! :D
damn!i tot ashley is a good person…but anyway it was an awesome story..im reall looking forward to read your update in uncivil union…!pms…!
OMG!! this story is killing me (in a good way!)… it’s sooo good! u’re a genius!! seriously! god! my jaw dropped like 30 feet, I swear! omg! PMS please please please!
I have to say I didn’t like the ending, only because I’m such a Spashley fan. But the writing in itself was really good, I kind of thought that he kidnaped them. So it was a surprise to know that they were actually working together. So you really had that element of surprise thrown in there. Very good, ok so more uncivil union? I’m excited for the “operation”
omg omg omg that is all i have all a plan she did a great job of it i found it a little weird how aiden left when she told him to but i didnt think i was that o well this doesnt make much sence i am so waiting for the continue pms plz plz plz
Uhhhh! Well what can I say?!? That was brilliant and to me at least, totally unexpected. Just goes to show the quality of your writing and plot lines. I must admit I also thought Aiden had kidnapped them. I feel very bad for Spencer, She certainly came of worst! I don’t usually like the idea of them coming up against each other but it keeps the drama going!!….Although, how do we know Kyla’s not lying???? Like you said, we’ll have to wait and see! Thanks for the time and effort you put into keeping we Spashley lovers entertained :0) I’m really looking forward to your new story and more Uncivil Union.