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Good Bye High School Hello World – (Chapter: Graduated)
It is king highs graduation day they are so happy they all thought they would go to Ashley and kylas place to celebrate, Ashley had decorated the place already but no one else new she had, Ashley was in her own little world all day planning a big surprise for Spencer and wasn’t actually going home, Cause she was good at keeping secrets no one had any idea at all.
They left king high for the last time it all felt so different there was only Aidan, kyla, Ashley and Spencer. Spencer’s family had gone home earlier as well as Glen, he had to work so he took Chelsea home because she wasn’t feeling so good.
Spencer went with Ashley and kyla went with Aiden due to Ashley only have two seats in her car so Aiden had offered her a lift it was a bit awkward cause they had broken up two weeks ago but they got to kyla’s place with out talking kyla opened the door and walked in Aiden following, they walked in and shock came over them both.
The place was decorated with balloons and streamers and a big banner saying graduation is finally over lets party, looking at the banner they both started to laugh when they relised who had done it they got to the food and sat down turning on the TV and waiting for there friends to come home not knowing they weren’t.
Ashley took a detour and they ended up at the beach Spencer looking at Ashley the hole trip wondering what was going on and were they where going Ashley stopped the car, looked at Spencer then got out and opened her door,
Spencer got out smiling "I thought we were going home to celebrate" Ashley looks at the beautiful blonde " I thought we would ditch the bored fest and come here instead" smiling looking at Spencer and guided her over to the pier as Spencer’s face light up looking over at the pier and seeing a table with flowers and to seats beside.
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I like it however um I would use paragraphs instead of one long passage. It makes it easier to read. Also break it up when they talk so the reader can follow it easier. I like that it’s going to be post high school. The only other thing I would watch out for are the spellings of the characters names. But I honestly think this will be good if you add a few corrections to it. PSMASAP.
I like it. But it needs some editing, which I would be more than happy to do for you. Just email me a wickednwise3@yahoo.com. Great start. PMS!!!
Nice start. It’s Spencer Carlin, by the way. I agree with Neverwithdraw too. I needs more details so the reader can picture it. Good, just needs editing. If you need help, pm me!