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My Loch Ness Monster
Title: My Loch Ness Monster
Author: SnarkySweetness on LJ / SchwartzyLogainne on FanFiction.net / PixieMaryAlice at TwilightFanCenter
Characters: Edward, Bella, Jacob, and Nessie. Each chapter is told from one of their perspectives.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Breaking Dawn book spoilers.
Set Post: Right after the epilogue.
Summary: Mindless mush about everyone’s different take on love for the little ‘monster’.
Disclaimer: I bow down to Stephenie Meyer.
Author's Note: I wrote this the day of the book release, right after I finished. I was feeling gooey on the inside, and I needed to get this out. It was very hard to wait to post this, but I didn’t want to put it up the day of because I would hate to come across this while waiting for my book. I’m going to post a chapter a day, to teach myself patience. There are four chapters planned for this, one from each characters perspective.
Chapter: 1: Bella
Renesmee, Ness, Nessie, my baby. I still couldn’t get over that this little, gorgeous, precious thing lying in front of me was real; let alone ours; Mine and Edward’s; our little miracle.
I felt a smile creep onto my lips as I watched her sleep. She was the most beautiful thing in this world; even more beautiful than Edward. I never thought I could love anything more than him, but the love I felt for our daughter was just a pure and deep as the love I felt for him, and I would die for her, just as I would for Edward.
Who wouldn’t die for her? She’d managed to charm nearly everyone who met her. So many had put their lives on the line, for her, and I would forever be gratefully.
I moved a hand to my stomach, remembering the very brief time I’d had her all to myself. I would never regret my decision to keep her safe; alive, even when no one understood that she wasn’t some monster.
I bet Jacob regretted all the times he’d referred to her as a “monster” and his hatred and want to kill her now; stupid shape-shifting wolf boy. As happy as I was that she had someone else in her life that would die for her, it still disturbed me that my best friend had imprinted on my daughter. Was it so horrible to want her all to myself?
I traced a finger over her jaw, my shield of protection over her. I was still a bit paranoid, even if the threat over her life seemed to be over; I wasn’t going to take any chances, not until she was a few months older anyway.
I had so little time with her before she would mature and be Jacob’s. The thought made me a little sad. I was happy I would get to keep her forever, that she would not die, but I wished I could get to experience her growing up normally. But then again; I could not have her at all, and that thought was unbearable.
And Charlie…I never thought my father, would be so enamored with someone. The fact that he was being so accepting of this entire ‘need to know’ thing still amazed me. If I could shed tears, I would have just thinking about the two of them together.
“I love you Renesmee.” I whispered, thinking this would be her last night in her crib, she was quickly outgrowing it, which meant a shopping trip with Alice and Rose, which was sure to make the “World’s Best Aunts” happy.
Were it not for them, Renesmee wouldn’t be here.
“I do too.” I hear Edward’s intoxicating voice drift from the doorway and an eight of a second later, felt his arms wrap around me from behind. I immediately leaned into him, feeling the warmth of emotion I usually felt when he was around.
“Come, let her sleep.” He said, taking me swiftly in his arms and into our bedroom. I moved my hands to his temples and send him fresh waves of thoughts; thoughts of him and of Nessie, seeing the smile come to his lips.
Before I knew it, we were wrapped up in our passion for one another.
This was happiness, and I would have it, forever.


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