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    Story written on October 22, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lf.beardesk.com/?p=49981
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    9. Glad you’re back.I miss you.Your story is one of a few that have me follow like a puppy.I can’t predict what is in the bag. Wonderful as always.Thanks,Olives.

    10. Thank you for taking the time to post another chapter of this story. I’ve said this before: it has a cinematic quality, like a foreign film. It has the stamp of an auteur. I can almost smell the coffee. Thank you.

    11. Olives, you are my hero. And this story is definitely worth staying up late reading. My only concern is Mari, I’m sensing that she has feelings for Bette?? God, I hope I’m wrong. I love the phrase about Bette willing to wait for her wife “however long that would take”. Don’t keep us waiting too long okay?:-)

    15. I’ve been checking back every few days and I was so pleased to see you posted another installment. You make the waiting for next season bearable, even pleasurable.

    18. Oh Olives…thank you. You have this wonderful gift that allows the reader to be right in the room with the characters. By writing about things which most of us are not familiar, like making coffee with the espresso machine…lighting the stove with a wooden match, it helps transport us right into the scene. I could feel Bette’s caress when she reached out to stroke Tina’s calf.

      You are the master Olives. I have told you this over and over, so I was very happy to see that Sparta (another one of my favs) totally agrees with me…this is THE BEST story on the board…it has been from the first chapter! Your characterization of Bette and Tina are spot on!!! Thanks again Olives!

    19. Still and always the best, Olives. I’d just like to echo everything that all the others have posted. Just a continuous echoing loop. But not like, the annoying kind. More of the soothing kind. If there was such a thing. Cause if there was, then that’s what this would be. :D 5 zillion stars.

    20. Just went through another read thru. And it’s official. You’re still the best. :D I really love this story. Like, love it love it. *lol* 5 x Infinity stars!

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