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6 Months- chapter 4
Story written on August 16, 2004 by Skipton.
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(23 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
I am enjoying your story. I like how Bette is strong staying to form with the show, and asking and taking responsibility for her part in the detoriation of their relationship. I find Tina too abrasive and uncaring. For I find this to be out of character for her personality on the show. I know that she has been hurt in the worst possible way, but I still think that she could be compassionate and reasonable with the situation. Also I’m not sure if Tina would be able to get involved in another relationship so soon after what her and Bette had. But I do like your story and it is direct and well written. Thanks for your time and comittment in writting this story for us.
Take the characters where you want. It’s great to see variations.
Of course, I hope this is just the first segment of many more!
love the fact that Bette walk out with her head high,even tho she was going to pieces on the inside. Tina told her it was over, Watch out NYC Bette POrter is on the way. Thanks
I’M liking the fact that bette is relizeing that life go;s on. And if she can pick herself up to bette porter she knows herself to be. really good, new twist.
This is excellent! My heart was breaking for them both, but I loved Bette is this scene. Strong, aking the questions she needed to ask, but not making a scene. Love it!
“as a human with the capability for mistakes” says it all go get a life. post more tie it up fast and bring back and ass kicking Bette.
Great storyline! Thanks for three posts already today…am I being selfish by asking for four…or five even? :)
I like your Bette! Trying hard to do the right things.
You write well! Emotional yet very reasonable!
Hope to see more…
I think their last meeting was consistent with their pattern of not communicating. Bette doing the last thing at the table was melodramatic. But, it gets her going on her way. Bette making a conscious decision to move forward on her own is a story we don’t often see. Bette is usually a wreck, groveling, distraught, etc. Bette’s new journey should be interesting and I look forward to it. Thanks!
Excellent storyline…really like this…hope you can continue often…sad and heartbreaking…love Bette holding her head up and living with her mistake…glad she tried one more time without running away…don’t like Tina but I think you’re playing her well…whether they get back together again or not (in your story) you’re telling it with emotion…bravo!!!
VERY GOOD! I’M OFF TO THE NEXT CHAP…
I love your stories Skipton. I hope you’ll return to grace us with more of your stories soon. I was wondering what happened to Chapter 4 of this story? Reading the readers’ comments – I would love to read Bette’s decision (as commented by techgal). Thank you!