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as long as your mine ch. 17
Shay is walking around east l.a. with his new cousins, rosa and juan jr. They have two hours to burn until the movie starts and a pocket full of money between all of them.
Rosa: man, I cant believe you guys got me seeing this dumb movie
Juan Jr: Its not dumb…its little fockers..
Shay: and if abuela ask, we saw the Narnia lion, or what ever its called
Juan jr: hell yea!!, I read what its about on the internet incase she ask qustions
Rosa: I wanted to see Narnia…next time isabelle and gabby are commin with us so we can see something cool
Shay: be cool rosa, you’ll love it once your in there… but we got two hours, what we gonna do?
Juan jr: lets go buy candy so we don’t gotta pay movie price….i hate movie price..
Rosa: everyone hates movie price dummy…
Shay: if you two argue anymore im either gonna scream or go to sleep, lets go buy candy
They walk to the corner store and while walking down the candy isle shay notices a familiar figure standing by the coolers grabbing bottles of beer. He grabs rosa’s are
Shay: lets go(whispering)
Rosa: why whats up? (looking worried)
Shay: we gotta get outta here…grab juan and lets go
………….
Shane and Carmen are lying in bed and looking in a baby name book.
Carmen: I found it!!
Shane: ok lets hear it
Carmen: Arianna Kailyn McCutcheon
Shane: your really holding out for a girl aren’t you babe?
Carmen: we have a boy…not that I wouldn’t be happy with another I just want a girl…
Shane: yes we do have a son, but I really think we getting another..check out this name…Landon Carson McCutcheon
Carmen: the landon is cool…I don’t like carson, how about landon riley…
Shane: I like riley…(smiling)..ok so its settled…Arianna Kailyn for a girl and Landon Riley for a boy…
Carmen: deal(kissing shane)
Shane: ok it’s a deal we kissed on it….
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Rosa grabs juans arm and pulls him out of the store.
Jaun jr: what the fuck yo!!…I was lookin for candy
Rosa: I don’t know shay said we had to go…and stop cussing
Juan jr: Mc man what the fuck?!?!
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(43 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
That bastard! Why can’t he just DIE???!!!!
effing gabe
death is to good for that ass…and why is he callin from shay’s phone? can’t wait to find out…and shane’s reaction is not gonna be good lemme tell ya!
Why in the world can’t Gabe just disappear permanently? He is such a dog and just won’t give them any peace. Sincerely hope he doesn’t take Shay. Let’s hope he doesn’t have a cell phone and had to stop at a pay phone to call Shane. Then maybe the kids can take his car keys and run like hell away from him. Someone call the police and get him arrested. Great update. Thanks for posting.