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    Badlands – Chapter 10

    Story written on May 17, 2007 by blox-tox.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lf.beardesk.com/?p=65714
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    The long and awaited talk.

     

     

     

    She left the house around 12.45pm; she mentioned that the lunch is starting at two o’clock. I didn’t know what to say but to nod at her. There’s nothing I can I say to turn back the hurt I did onto her. She’s disappointed in me and I can’t blame her for it.

     

    Now she knows that I’m not telling her about my self. The true me. She’s hurt that I’m selfish enough not to go with her and that I’m hiding secrets from her. But it is only for the best, right? Imagine, if she does know about me… all about me. The work that I do, the work that my dad and our family does. What will she think of then? Will she still love me?

     

    I tried to help her to get DJ stuff into her car like I always do but she stopped me. She took it off my hands like I would bring disease onto it. She didn’t say a single word after I asked her that question and her reply to it. I needed to hear it, that she loves me because if she did stopped because of her reasons, I would’ve leave right then and there. But she does love me, even with all of my selfish reasons not to go with her to her family’s place and the secret that she knows I’m hiding from her and that I am still not willing to tell her, she still fucking loves me.

     

    I grabbed more of the black cases filled with the equipments but she still won’t let me touch them, to help her. “Carmen…” I said to her. I said her name filled with hopelessness and misery. I can’t stand her like this like she doesn’t want me anymore. This is our first fight and I am hoping it would be the last.

     

    She went on with her stuff, from her room to the car. I tried to help her until I couldn’t anymore because there was no reason for it. I left standing in her hall way of the house, watching going up to her room and out of the house. Doing several trips until everything is in her jeep.

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    1. I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !

    2. wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!

    4. oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!

    6. oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…

    8. Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!

    9. Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!

    10. Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!

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