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Brief Encounter Chapter 10
The dream came back haunting me like any other nights I could see myself looking at her. Both of us understood what happened that night at Provocations. I couldnt believe we spent seven years just to be undone by one stupid mistake.
Tina: Oh no. I saw it
The image of us in the room was clear in my head. This is happening again I cant do this. Get this dream to stop. Get it stopped please
Bette: Im sorry Im sorry
Please wake up! Please wake up. This is the same dream over and over again. Please wake up! Stop!!! I cant stand the hurt anymore please let it stop!
Bette: Im sorry
I could feel myself perspiring profusely. Please wake up. This has been going on too long. It has been three years please wake up!!! Then there was the slap in the face. My eyes opened. My breathing was quick and uneven. Why do I have that dream again? Over and over for the past three years? Isnt us being apart punishment enough? I lay myself back down on the bed, controlling my breathing. Calm, breathe, calm, breathe, calm I keep reminding myself as sweat trickled down my forehead.
I looked around and found myself in an unfamiliar room. Then I remembered where I was. I was in the hotel room, I could hear the sound of traffic blaring from outside. Even through the thick curtains I could feel the sun is rising. Argh what time is it? I looked at the clock it read 5:20 AM. Dont people ever sleep here anymore? I pulled my pillow to block the sound of traffic. I need my sleep.
I have been here for a few days now, carefully planning my way to find her without letting any of the girls know any of it. The past few days had been hectic. Everything else pushed aside, I only have one thing remaining here; is to find the love of my life.
I thought about my plans for the day; I will see her later today, and we will talk and I will tell her how much I miss her and how much I love her. I will tell her that I love her like I used to everyday for the seven years we were together and more. I will ask for a second chance at us and if she said she couldnt accept me and she had moved on then I will bid forever goodbye. But if she feels the same way, then I would love nothing more than to show her every single day that we belong together.
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(48 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
I had a feeling you were going to do that to us. Please, please, post soon. I think I’m more pumped up to see Tina, than Bette is. I will die if Tina is in New York. Someone please, let Bette know where Tina is, so that Bette, (and us) can prepare ourselves for this bit of information. Thumbs, PLEASE?!!!
You had me fooled. I thought that was Bette’s POV! Great job. Please get the two together soon!!!
Well! That was a surprise! I assumed it was Bette talking.
Bette was the one who wanted the distance? Wow?
i sit at my computer with my mouth gaped open. I honestl didn’t see that coming. great twist. post soon please.
that was beautiful. where’s the rest of this story? post soon!
I totally thought that was Bette’s POV. Where is Tina living? or is she in NY while Bette’s in LA. Looking forward to the next.
Please don’t keep us hanging so long for the next update, love to know what is happeing soon, just let the loving begin between our two favorite characters.
NO! Tina can not be in New York while Bette is in California! Are they in the same city? Great story! I kept thinking Bette – nice curve ball! Can’t wait for the continuation of this story. *smiles* Thanks!
Very nice Thumbs….but way to SHORT. You can´t leave us hanging here to long you hear. Post soon with some good news for B&T.
Thumbs you have captured all of Bette’s doubts so well. I can’t wait for the meeting. What’s the plan and who is the mystery admirer?? I’m hooked
No words can express how u stirred up feelings inside me with ur writing. So I’m just gona say a heartfelt thank you for writing all these beautiful chapters. Thanks.
Short but oh so sweet…..You had me fooled too!….So are we going to see Bette and Tina come face to face….soon right thumbs???Thanks for another awesome chapter…please post soon.
I wasn’t expecting that! That was really insightful as well as beautiful…Thanks again.
Great story! Please let them find one another….and soon. Keep up the good work.
Perfect
Thanks for another great chapter. They’re going to talk soon, right?
Hi Thumbs, with a big smile on my face, that chapter was so so good, especially the last sentence.
Thank you.
OK I’m not the total idiot, I meant Tina but still Thumbs you have me blown away.
beautiful twist there, never expected that, very very good Thank you
That was beautiful, I hope you will post soon
Awww!! What … Tina! that was just to cool and slyly done thumbs!!FANTASTIC!!!!!!!
GO GET HER BETTE…hurry..great post..don’t leave us hanging too long..
God I don’t know this is good or bad because where is Tina stay and how she gonna meet Bette. Please let them see each other. Post soon, thank you!