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Escort – Chapter 21
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Previously:
“What’s going on?” Alice asked slightly tipsy.
“Helena and Tina” Shane said nodding towards the dance floor.
“Oh shit” Alice said.
“Fuck I can’t watch this” Bette cried out before making her way towards the exit.
As Tina was dancing with Helena her eyes caught on Bette as the brunette quickly made her way out of the club.
“I’m sorry I have to go” she said getting out of the raven haired woman’s hold.
“What’s going on?”
“Nothing I just need to do something” Tina explained quickly before she started to run towards the exit.
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”Bette!” Tina yelled after the brunette as she made her way out of the club making Bette turn.
“Wait! where are you going?” Tina asked as she came up to Bette.
“Home” Bette said as she turned around and started walking.
“Wait Bette what’s going on?”
“What’s going on!?” Bette exclaimed “You danced with her Tina!”
“I’m sorry! It didn’t mean anything” Tina said desperately.
“You know how much I hate her and still you dance with her!”
“It didn’t mean anything!”
“That’s not the point!”
“Bette please” Tina said grabbing onto Bette’s arm as she was about to walk away again.
“What do you want from me Tina!?” Bette yelled “First you ask me to give you time and I did…do you know how hard it is for me to give up control like that?”
“Yes” Tina whispered.
“And now you are here dancing with her…what the fuck is wrong with you Tina!?”
“I’m sorry ok I’m sorry!” Tina cried.
“What were you thinking!?” Bette asked angrily.
“I wasn’t thinking ok!”
“I can’t do this anymore” Bette said shaking her head.
“What are you talking about?” Tina asked.
“Obviously you don’t care about my feelings”
“Bette…that’s not true” Tina whispered.
“Do you know how much you’ve hurt me?” Bette asked with tears in her eyes.
“I’m so sorry… please” Tina said coming up close to the brunette putting her hand on Bette’s cheek.
“No” Bette said backing away “I can’t do this anymore…it’s over”
“No don’t say that!” Tina cried.
Bette gave the blonde one last look before turning and walking away.
Tina stayed on the street watching the brunette walk away as her tears kept falling. She felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to see Shane standing there with a worried look on her face.
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Something is fishy about this date! I hope we are all wrong. We all know Bette is a control freak and has to have things her way! PPVS!
Sniff!..sniff!.. I smell trouble… and drama are on the way here :-p nice chapter! You really know how to keep the readers on their toes and pining for more ;-) thanks for the update and PPS? :-)
I have a really bad feeling about this date! Ahh Tina! They need to talk their shit over
Bette was totally right to drop Tina! I repeat Tina is an idiot… But I do want then together in the end (lol) so what does that make me?
Oh no trouble coming and hope this guy not hurting Tina. Bette and Tina need to talk and work thing out. Please post more, thanks!
Ok I am taking your word that you will fix it! Happy B&T please!
Oh Dear! Something tells me that it’s going to get worse right! Thank you for this story.
Great update. I think Tina should not have taken this date with this strange man. After all, he did say he was doing it to get back at his ex-wife, not a good thing. Hope she will be okay and this guy doesn’t turn out to be a weirdo and hurt her. Hopefully she won’t take any more dates. Thanks for posting.
I hope this guy doesn’t turn around and hurt Tina. I am a Tina lover, but I would have done the same thing Bette did…. broken up with her.
Bette was going to have meaningless sex with some stranger in a bathroom stall and shes giving Tina grief over Helena? Bette has the problem and Tina should stop apologizing for it. Geez Bette, I suppose you’re going to say that they breathed the same air so it’s like cheating right? Get a grip.
I have a bad feeling about this date.Thank you for the update.PPS
bad vabs about the date. so want them to be together i’ll trust you! this once!
Why do think the date is a bad idea and why do I think we have not seen the last of Helena.
That date smells like a disaster waiting to happen. Although she does not sleep with her clients Tina is somewhat careless with her background checks…. Put it down to the fact that she is not thinking clearly after her recent dingdong with Bette…. I still think she has a very hard episode ahead of her. As much as I like… no love B&T….. had I been Bette, I would have given Tina a wide berth after finding out what she did for a living …… Harsh I know but I enjoy the story nonetheless….. So get back to your keyboard and fix all these wrongs ….. Pretty please. Thank you very much for your story! ;-)
And another thing Tina, don’t change professions because it would please Bette, fuck Bette, you do it for yourself. If it makes you happy, not that POS. That’s what I’d tell a friend, do it for yourself.
Tina is a pushover. Why is she going on a date again? It’s stupid. I understand Bette is hurting but can’t they just TALK about things? That’s so stupid. Right now, I think they are both acting stupid. PLEASE FIX THIS! PPS
This is best chapter so far! Glad you wrote it the way you did,people usually don’t get that ff’s different than the L word, it’s what you write of it. Bette might be control freak but think everyone would do something for the person they love if it really bothers them. Don’t think of it as controling, at all. So think only ones that would ‘hate’ you would be ones that don’t see the difference between tibette from tlw and your tibette. Anyway, best chap so far for me, emotional and challenhing. Great job, pps!
This is best chapter so far! Glad you wrote it the way you did,people usually don’t get that ff’s different than the L word, it’s what you write of it. Bette might be control freak but think everyone would do something for the person they love if it really bothers them. Don’t think of it as controling, at all. So think onlyn
Tina is an emotional pushover w/poor self esteem. Otherwise, her no to this latest “date” would have been no way, no how. PPVS.
I sincerely hope that this last escort date doesn’t turn out to be some psychopath.
Sorry to say, but sometimes Bette can be an ass, but Tina is being a bigger ass at the moment. I hope all goes well on her last escort date.
think tina is just very soft-hearted. i think there are girls around who are so polite and bit too trusting who would have danced with helena like how tina did. I understand why Bette wants a break but I hope she regrets breaking up. Also, I didn’t like how rude Bette sounded asking Tina to move aside…
i hope everyone here is wrong… when this guy calls the day before, lets hope she meets him at the dinner… and she doesn’t tell him where she lives… ok drama on the way… love this story… and can’t wait to see where you take us… pps
oh and i think it’s great Tina is taking her life more seriously and quitting her escort work but I hope she is doing it cos that’s what she wants to do.