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Fire and Ice Chapter 21
April 1999
Tina quietly fell up against the bathroom door, her body laden with the shocks of the electrical firestorm brewing on the other side. She tightend her grip on the knob, slowly replacing the oxygen she had withheld from her aching lungs.
This is crazy… she tried to convince herself.
She found her reflection in the mirror and was not surprised to see herself a deep shade of crimson. She hastily moved towards the sink, turning on the cold water in effort to calm her reddening flesh. The running water quickly reminded her of her urgent need to relieve herself.
As she slid her black panties down, she glanced at the unquestionably moist reminder that Bette was turning her on like no one ever had before. She bashfully looked away and stiffled a smile despite her solitude.
After washing up and tapping cool water to her burning cheeks, Tina straightened her dress over her hips and lightly lifted her chest into place. She stared at the earring in her palm, considering the outcomes of her evolving plan.
Without allowing herself to think too long and hard about it, Tina placed the earring discretly behind the faucet. She avoided her own eye contact in the mirror as she tilted her head to remove the remaining gold earring dangling from her left ear lobe. After casually slipping it into her cluth, she tossled her hair forward to conceal her empty ears.
Checking herself one more time for presentablility, Tina looked through herself in the mirror, refusing to acknowledge that she had just committed the "oldest trick in the book". And all for a woman…
Not just any woman…Tina couldn’t help but contribute whistfully to her own dialogue.
Tina turned and shut the lights off before opening the door. She stood for a moment in complete darkness, searching for poise. The stillness of the moment finally hushed her racing thoughts. Tina confidently opened the door, a pleasant smile on her face.
What Tina saw instantly turned a smile of conveience into a full fledged pout of desire.
Bette had removed her jacket, it now lay elegantly drapped on the back of her commanding chair. She still stood leaning on the desk, her body on display for Tina’s benefit. The lacy white camisole clung to her body like a wet bathing suit. Tina reminded herself to breath when she began to see spots in her vision.
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(43 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
I hate when that happens…go knock on another door!!!!!
BOOM, BOOM, BOOM!! “Dinner’s ready!” LOL! excuse me while i take a long, cold shower. good grief that was hawt.
Woah, definitely an unwelcome interruption!! I really love the anticipation and tension that you are so beautifully crafting here, its so excruciating but so hot at the same time! But please don’t leave us hanging too long!
You are just evil! LOL Seriously, I’m glad your mother is doing better. Hope your sister is doing ok as well. Write when you can.
Whoever is knocking on that door will meet their end in no time
AGHHH bet that is Eric! So that was so not nice of you to stop there so you best be posting again soon because I can’t wait for your next chapter:)
That was just wrong.
So close and yet still so far. Brillant chapter!
that was just evil….but SO good ;) thx & can’t wait to see who’s at the door
Unbelievable! (Just let it not be Alice…)
Well hello Eric
oh yeah…awww…tell that person to F… off!!! pps
Fire, the first word that comes to mind is: delicate! (next to the usuals… you know… like excellent, unbelievable… ^^) I felt goosebumps running down my spine when Bette touched Tina’s hand and it’s certainly too hot here to blame the weather for that. Thank you for the loooong post!! Have a nice weekend and pps
of course its alice… eric is probably looking for tina… dammmmmm what a place to stop…PPS
I’m like Tina – I have to keep reminding myself to breathe. Wow! Thank you for the lengthy chapter. It was worth the wait. I can’t believe it’s going to be over soon. You simply have to give us at least a first date in your exquisite prose…
I’m with Rau tell who ever it is to F Off!
WOW and ARGH for the interruption!!! :)PPS
Once again you have delivered a breathtakingly beautiful chapter! I don’t know who is banging on the door but their timing SUCKS!! Thanks for the long chapter. I savored every word. Can’t wait for that NC-17!
Very nice story! I love the anticipation ;o)
these two are going to blow the hell up when they finally kiss! great story. I hate to hear that it is almost over, but if you must, I hope you go out with a bang!! pps
oh my goodness…NO…go away whoever that is…more please…wow what a buildup.
Jeeze, I think I felt everything they did in that chapter! If I was Bette, I’d break that person’s hands for the interruption. It has to be Alice, nobody else would be that annoying….although, she just probably wants to alert Bette to the fact that Eric’s looking for Tina now. Unbelievable update Fire!
Oh for the love of all things!!!! how could u…then again how could u not. seeing as it is a guarantee that we will b back.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO……….someone always interrupts!!!!! you are such a tease..lol…PPS PPS PPS PPS…
That was so good!!