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Heaven ‘n Hel – Chpt 12
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Previously
Removing the ring from the box, I took Bette’s left hand. “Bette, will you wear this as a constant reminder of my undying love?”
“Hel, I never expected anything like this. I …”
“Bette, may I place this on your finger?”
“Yes. Yes, of course,” she replied. I slipped the ring onto her finger. “I love you,” I said before kissing her.
When the kiss ended, Bette caressed my face and placed her hand, that now wore my ring, in my palm.
“I love you, Sweetheart,” she whispered. “Let me show you again how much.”
“Will you moan for me?” I asked, playfully.
“Incessantly.”
Chapter 12
We’d made love how many times this day? I don’t know. I’d lost count.
But I remembered the number of children we had between us. Three.
“Sweetheart?”
Helena lay with her back to me. My arms were wrapped around her. My coarse hair pressed into her gorgeous, shapely ass.
“Hmmm?” Helena murmured.
“Are you asleep, Baby?”
“No, obviously not, Darling,” she replied. “Are you ready for more?”
“Hmmm. Well, as always, yes. But I wanted…I rather wanted to ask you what your plan was for the children? Are you awake enough to tell me?” I asked softly, squeezing her and rotating my pelvis into her behind.
“Bette, if you’re wanting to talk seriously, I must ask you to refrain from the jiggling,” Helena breathed, as she swayed her ass against my pelvis.
I thought I detected a slight giggle issuing from my love.
“Hel, is my jiggling creating giggling?” I smirked.
“It’s making me insane. Quit!” she said, rolling over to face me. “But just for now.”
We laughed, and Helena caressed her fingertips lightly over my cheek.
“Do you feel like telling me about the plan you intimated you had? Concerning the children?” I asked softly.
“Yes, Darling,” she replied, leaning in to kiss my lips tenderly.
“Mmm. So, tell me. How are we going to make this work? You know I can’t leave Angelica for long. And I know you can’t leave Wilson and Jun Ying for an extended length of time. How are we going to go to Italy and not see the children?” I asked, murmuring and massaging my fingers over the soft skin of Helena’s back.
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Peggy is the perfect deus ex machina. And you can be too when you give us the further adventures of Bette and Helena.
Z how do you do it with these two characters? I just love it how you were able to make them say the one was thier Heaven and the other her Hel..And I must say that I love Peggy she is one Hel of a lady,,,Z great chapter Z and thanks for remmebering me, LOL!!
Ahhhh….a nice sweet ending with a bow or in this case, a diamond on top. Thank you for bringing the ladies to a decidedly satisfying and loving closure. Indeed, we are thankful that you have shared your gift over the many, many months and hope that as you transition through the next phase…next tale…you will find time to share with us again!!
Maybe, maybe it was just my imagination…Regardless,it _is_ cool for this time of year – but it allows for a better crop of lettuce! I believe your readers are calling for a “new” adventure… and, as always, I will be in attendance(albeit silent)I will be there. And yes, you are definitely more capable than of late. We ALL know it! So get on w/it!!!! Just leave Hell behind you………sshush now.
oh z, say it ain’t so…okay, i got that you had to end this one…but how about one with b&h in florence or rome…that would be fantastico…or their return from italy…whatever your pleasure…but you gotta give us something…but until the ‘spirit’ hits you…thank you, thank you, thank you for another great fic!!!
How about… one night in a B&B/Vineyard type resort…that has a wine cellar…!!!!
I love happy endings! *sigh*I would love for you to continue, zheese, but if it doesn’t feel right to then I wouldn’t want you to.
hey Z baby thank you so much for this story, I really loved it and am a bit sad to see it has ended. I hope one day you’ll find it within you to continue their adventures in Italy. I love Peggy she really is a lifesaver here and I’m sure she’s gonna enjoy spending time with the children as well. Thanks for posting baby and I hope all turns out well for you and that we soon may see another story coming from you.
Well, this is a very nice ending indeed, Zheese, and of course I’d be absolutely delighted if you could continue this story. On the other hand, let me see… Italy is a direct 11-hour flight away from Caliornia ( it is a bit far ), so to be honest, I don’t really see how this could work… I mean, I don’t think Hel and Bette would see their children that often ’cause that would be just too exhausting for the kids, wouldn’t it ? Besides, would Bette be happy if she could only see Angelica every other week-end or during the holidays ?… Anyway, since I don’t believe you could have written a more perfect ending for your story, why wouldn’t you consider writing a whole new Helebette/Belena fic ? With a whole new beginning ? As talented as you are, I’m sure you must have thousands of fresh ideas for a brand new exciting story. Can you tell I love beginnings ? Especially “It’s a thin line…” I believe this was your masterpiece, Zheese. Un capolavoro ! Un chef-d’oeuvre !!! Anyway, whatever you decide, be sure that I’ll be reading you. Just keep writing.
thanx ao much 4 a great update doll – i luved it. i personally would luv 2 c thiz story continue 2 itly – but u have 2 follow ur gut on thiz n decide if itz right 4 u. well cheerz – ethier way it has been great!!
So fast! So fast? So fast. :( I’m sad you’ve ended it already. You’re one hell of a writer. Gonna miss your future updates.
How about Bette pouring red wine all over Helena… and licking it up. Slowly in the vineyard. (then getting discovered and a subsequent mass orgy – but that’s me, not Zhee) :D