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I Want to Come Over, post 35 Robette ending
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Rosanna stared out of the window of the Bentley. She did not trust her ability to drive since she had heard from Bette who asked her to come over around seven. She expected the goodbye Jane talk to come tonight. She had not heard from Bette since she and Tina had taken off for parts unknown for several days.
Rosanna had understood since becoming involved with Bette that Tina was her soul mate much the way Theresa was hers. That was the kind of love that never went away. Add a child to the equation and she knew she was a fool to ever let herself love the fiery sexy brunette. She just couldn’t stop her heart.
The car pulled up as she saw Tina leaving with Angelica. Tina and Bette shared a tender kiss and Rosanna felt her stomach drop. So that was it. They had reconciled. Denise saw the same exchange and felt for Ms. Rosanna. She really liked Ms. Bette and it made her sad that she would no longer be Ms. Rosanna’s companion. The blonde one was hot and she could see that Ms. Bette loved her but she still held out hope for Ms. Rosanna. On impulse Denise spoke into the intercom.
“Use the back door Ms. Rosanna; it will be a nice surprise.”
Rosanna was dazed and blindly followed Denise’s direction. She found Bette standing by the pool lost in thought. The sight of the woman pierced her soul. Bette must have sensed her presence because she turned and met her eyes with both surprise and joy.
“I watched the car leave; I came back here hoping for a few minutes alone before I knocked on your back door.” Rosanna explained. Just looking at Bette she could tell that she had made love with Tina, it was written all over her body.
“Hi, sweetheart” Bette approached her to give her a kiss in greeting and stopped as she saw the tension in the woman before her. “I missed you.” She opted for a kiss on the cheek as she became wary of Rosanna’s quietness. She felt a new fear and dread as she looked at the woman who she planned to spend the rest of her life with. Had she blown it? Had Rosanna decided to return to Theresa or begin a relationship with Kay in her absence?
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Rosanna, the boss…Not! Rosanna will always be fighting Tina for Bette! IMO
just caught up on all three posts. LOL. The fat lady is singing proudly and well, I’m happy with each ending you posted. Specifically, I’m happy with the possibility of choices. Yes, I agree. This one was the hottest ’cause, it’s Bette and Ro. of course. Great word weaving 8D
Two thumbs up, but the TiBetter in me will always lean towards the other ending… good to see Ro happy though. The waffler in me is satisfied with having two great conclusions. Thanks!
i like both endings…..guess i like to have my cake and eat it too…..lmao……but both were awesome…..
Two endinngs=twice as many chapters. It’s a Kelika bonanza, and I am thrilled. I’m selfish and enjoy reading your story, so hank you for not picking one pairing over the other.
This deserves SIX stars. I loved how you took Rosanna on an emotional roller coaster, from fearing the worst to taking (sexual) charge. Hot and totally believable. Thanks, kelika!
Alright Ro, take back your woman! That was amazing. I hope you continue with this story. Both ending were great, although I tend to lean toward RoBette. I’m sure it’s because there is no bitter history like TiBette. Glad I had that Basia song on my i-tunes, haven’t heard it in awhile.
WOW!!! I just read all three chapter’s. Great!!!! Wonderful!!!! I loved it!!!!! This was a Great Story!!!! Thank you
I am with everyone else…both endings are good. You have created a story where we want all three of them to be happy. Unfortunately, that can’t happen. I didn’t agree though with the “free paper” part though. A white woman saying that to a black woman and talking about belonging to her, I would think would be a bit offensive…but that is just me. Thanks for giving us both endings.
okay that was hot as hell women!i like a women full of surprises,yes im atibetter but bette with any women can make anything hot as hell.im glad the fatlady hasnt sang yet..lol
Bette’s freedom is over… free paper burn. I love that Ro has taken charge and is leaving Bette no room no doubt as to who’s boss. Great update K, PPS.