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Just The Girl – Chapter Twenty One (a HYD-inspired fic)
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CHAPTER TWENTY ONE: You’ve Got A Hold On Me
"I don’t like you
But I love you
Seems that I’m always
Thinkin’ of you
Oh, you treat me badly
I love you madly
You’ve really got a hold on me
You really got a hold on me"
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"Are you okay?"
"Y-yeah.."
"No you’re not. You’re shaking.."
"I-I’m f-fine.. S-see?"
"Stop pretending Porter. Here.."
"Nnnnoooooooo. K-keep y-your jjjjjacket."
"You’re cold, you need it more."
"NO! I don’t w-want y-you to ggget s-sick.."
"I’m already wet.."
"…"
"What are you smiling about?"
"…"
"Oh eff you Porter! Take your mind out of the gutter.."
"…"
"What?!"
"F-for wwwhat it’s w-worth.. I-I’m wwet t-too.."
"Wipe that grin off of your face. You’re insufferable you know that?"
"S-sorry, c-can’t h-help it."
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"I think it’s stopping.." Tina said as she put her hand out of the cover the waiting shed provided and tried to feel the rain drops falling from the sky. She smiled as she barely felt the water on her palm.
"Good.." Bette breathed a sigh of relief as she looked up at the sky and saw the dark clouds starting to disperse, allowing rays of sunlight to finally seep in. She rubbed her bare arms with her hands as she tried to warm herself up some more. She was no longer shaking as bad as she was a few minutes ago but she still felt a little cold. She looked down on her clothes and grimaced, she was starting to regret wearing them now. If only she had incorporated a jacket into her outfit, maybe she wouldn’t feel as bad as she did right now. Damn I probably look like shit, she mentally cursed.
Tina looked at Bette in time to catch the small frown on her face as she looked down on her wet clothes. "Don’t worry, you still look nice.." She said sincerely, guessing just what the brunette was thinking. She knew that Bette Porter was more than a little vain, so it wasn’t surprising if she put so much effort into what she was going to wear for their first date. She could just imagine the level of frustration that Bette was feeling to have what she had probably meticulously prepared for ruined by the elements of nature.
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I haven’t read a fic this long in along time & I still can’t wait to read every new update. U are doing an amazing job-I am totally hooked.The elevator scene was nice-they are getting so close.
Fantastic update! Love the use of the elevator scene and how they were found cuddling by the demolition crew. There is some meaningful irony in that…
This is such a fun story. I wonder what thenew day will bring for these two. pps
just caught up on all the chapters you just posted :) What a date!!!! WOW,after reading that chapter i can’t help but think that Bette must be really hungry LOL.anyway please post more of this brilliant story soon.Thanks
hahaha what a date and Tina is funny calling Bette rape rape lol!
Well that is one hell of a first date. Let’s hope the next one is a little more tame. :)
WOW!!! What a date!!! Thanks PPS
”demolition men found them at six in the morning the following day” – that was some date!
pplllleeeaaaaassssssseeeeeeeee post another 20 chapters sometime soon…really soon…maybe now?!! i think i might just be addicted to this story!!
Hey, wat a date but at least the date happened:)I meant to leave u a comment last nite but there was sum prob wit da site. Anyway as u know love da story n looking forward to next chapter.