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Never Been Kissed – A Tibette Story – MyStyle ;) ~ Chapter 15 ~
‘I really can’t believe you. You’ve….you’ve changed so much. I thought we we’re friends?’
‘I am your friend Tina. But I’m also your boss. And as your boss I don’t have time for slackers who fall in love on the job. I needed a story Tina….and Jenny got it.’
Hearing that woman’s name made her skin boil even more. She’d make sure that bitch paid for the pain she’d caused.
‘You want a story Max?’ she asked, leaning her hands on his desk. ‘I’ll get you a story. I’LL GET YOU THE BEST FUCKING STORY!’ she finished, before grabbing the paper and striding from the room.
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Chapter 15
By the time Tina got to Rentworth High, it was after 10. Before she’d left her office building she’d gone in search of Jenny. Finding her in the canteen, laughing and talking to a group of colleagues, she had gone straight up to her and slapped her hard across the face, much to the surprise of on-lookers. It had certainly knocked the smile from Jenny’s face.
‘That, is for the shit you spread on the paper’ she’d said. ‘I don’t know how you did it, but I’ll find out….and when I do, your name’s gonna be on the front cover again. But this time it will be the truth.
As she got out of the car and walked over to the school, she noticed her friends, sitting in the usual meeting place. Deciding she owed them an apology first, she walked over.
As she approached, Jade saw her coming and nodded her way, signalling everyone to turn around.
‘Careful what you say girls, she may be wired…’ Jade mocked.
Tina carried on walking, she had to tell them it wasn’t her that wrote those lies.
Kate stood up and took a few steps, closing the gap between her and the blonde.
‘Is it true Tina? Have you been playing all of us…’
‘Kate…you know the truth. That story…it wasn’t mine. First thing I saw of it was this morning when my friend rang me.’
‘So why is your name on the bottom?’
Tina shook her head. ‘You know your relationships with Sophie and her friends…well that’s what my relationship with Jenny Schecter is like. I never thought she would do anything like this though.’
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(48 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
And Bette better not be late dammit. ;) If this story isn’t in the running for this quarter’s Cold Shower Award then something is really wrong with the FF readers. I really enjoyed Tina’s story. It reminds me that after high school no one will really give a shit about your glory days.
I have read this story from the beginning and think it’s an intriguing premise. What would it be like for us to go back to HS and reinvent ourselves, then have a complication like this arise? Great job with this. Thank you!
:) :) :) So sweet! thanks!
Is it 4o’clock yet. Bette better start running so she wont be lATE// sHE WILL BE THERE BEFOR 4 THANKS
I am sorry to hear that this story is coming to an end soon, but I really enjoy reading it. PPS.
god babe… i just love this story… and i do hope bette is early… i have a feeling she will be… and i like the others here… don’t want you to end this story… there is so much more to write… like bette could go on and continue teaching… and tina could also teach… or take over that shithead MAX’s job… so babe bring it on…
Hope Bette shows up and Jenny gets a swift kick in the pants and Sophie is expelled. PPS
THis was a great movie but your fanfic version has been brilliantly re-written. I’ve enjoyed this fic tremendously and hopefully you will write a new story, soon. Ciao.
Excellent! I am so happy you posted! I hope Tina quits the paper after this article! I hope you will bless us with another chappy this week! As for the sequel I am so down for that!
You are so right…You are a great writer! I am so into this story and I can’t wait for the next chapter!! I have so many questions in my head. Did Bette hear Alice on the Radio? If she did, whill she go and see Tina? Will she ever forgive Tina? Will the be together atlast? Please don’t keep me waiting fo too long…Please post soon!!!
So happy to see that my begging for more pages has worked out in my favor!! See… it wasn’t that hard to please me…. Loved the chapter and I agree with AngelDana that I won’t be able to watch the film again without thinking of your version.
oh this is so special. great chapter. I hope Bette reads the story and comes to kiss Tina. pps
Man, I love that movie and especially the ending. I am so looking forward to that scene. Poor Tina will be standing with her heart not only on her sleeve but radiating throughout her body. Will Bette be there, only you will tell us.
kelloggs: Don’t get me wrong — my heart belongs to Danish. But your fic has caused me to to expand my horizons a bit! Thanks for another great update. I loved the Jenny smackdown. PPS!
wow i love your story your i just finshed reading all the chapters and i have to tell you im hooked keep up the good writing thanks for sharing pps thanks
bet u thought i wasn’t gonna leave a comment did’nt ya :)… well it’s been a great ride and i’m looking forward to how ur gonna end it…but i think wot i said to u b4 there would be a good way to end it…ur idea tho for ur next installment sounds like a winner too! ;)
This is a really great read. I do hope that Bette will show herself at the game if not for Tina then for her team.(I do hope she does show for Tina). Thanks PPVS
This is a greatstory to read hope gets there before the game, and so B&T can reconnect, please post the next chapter soon.
So good to see you have updated this story, Kelloggs !!! Well, I haven’t yet it yet but before I do and before it slips my mind, I thought I would just throw a few ideas of movies that could inspire a new story of yours : I’m thinking Notting Hill, When Harry met Sally, Jerry Maguire, The shop around the corner/You’ve got mail ( although NYGayLady’s great fic “the nearness of you” reminds of me of these two movies ). Anyway, off to read now. I can’t wait ! ( doing my best Schwarzenegger impression ) I’ll be back !!
Oh my… that was… amazing… truly amazing… And yea, I’ll never watch the film again without wishing it was B&T in it. Thanks a lot for this story… hmm… it does hit home in a lot of ways from Tina’s side… minus any relationship for that matter :P Ooo… there’s this movie I love soooo much too, it’s almost the same, it’s ‘How to lose a guy in 10 days’… heh heh? ;) Can’t wait for Friday to arrive… but final chappy :( no worries, will wait for your sequel though :D
Another enthralling chapter K, way to go!! Glad to see Tina didn’t take any shit off of one Ms. Jenny! Go get your woman Tina!
Kelloggs, I must say I looove the way you put all the pieces of the puzzle together to get here. That’s absolutely remarkable in my opinion. Not to mention so exciting and enjoyable for your readers. You pulled that off beautifully ( although I believe the trickiest part was in your previous chapter and you had achieved it masterfully ). That being said, the way you used Alice’s position and friendship to Bette in this chapter is really smart ( in fact, I would even go so far as to say that you could have made use of the character of Kit as well since you had so cleverly introduced her as not only Bette’ sista, but also one of Tina’s colleagues… ). Anyway, this chapter was brilliant, as usual, and this is all very promising for the “dénouement”, for the Grand Finale. Like most of your other readers, I just can’t wait !!! By the way, I’d like to add a few other suggestions to my previous list of movies that you could base a new story on : “Down with love”, “Frankie and Johnny” and “Ed TV”. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS DELIGHTFUL STORY and Kudos to you !
fantastic chapter, please post the next chapter soon
You, Kelloggs, have ruined me! I cannot watch that film ever again without wishing it was your version I was watching! And woah, hold it a second.. the only week I don’t beg and beg and beg for you to post early.. you do?! WHAT?! *sigh* You’re cruel..But I forgive you.. because this, my friend, was brilliant! It had better have a happy ending.. You know I’ll pound you with PMs if you don’t. And Bette needs to get her job back! Who’s coaching the girls in her absence? Surely the school knows by now that she didn’t pursue an affair with a student? GET HER BACK! BETTE, come home! To Tina! And to your beloved basketball team! I so can’t wait for Friday. Bring on the final! Rentworth all the way! And if you’re still after a film for the sequel, I’ll have a look around. After reading your story, I thought of doing a similar thing with soem films but I’ve had no luck finding any. I’ll keep an eye out and PM you with any I find.
Right now i feel the need to hunt down Jenny and kick her ass to the moon… kelloggs you should be proud of yourself, your way of writing is amazing. I bow to you! Post soon :)
This is awesome and love it!