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Original of the Species
Chapter 2
Wow they both thought in unison as they quickly broke the hands shake surprised at the jolt of electricity they felt.
A few seconds went by, both of them not knowing what to say next but still maintaining the eye contact. It was Bette who took the initiative first and smiled that killer smile of hers.
“So do you come here often?” What the fuck? What is wrong with me today? Maybe Alice is right, I AM rusty she thought to herself after that second lame line.
The blonde softly chuckled again thinking that Bette was indeed the most beautiful woman she had ever seen, but also that there also was a softness and tenderness to her that was marvelous to witness.
“Actually this is my first time here, but something tells me you already knew that” Tina replied with a confidence she had no idea she possessed.
Bette softly smiled a guilty smile.
“Busted again… it shows in your face I guess” Bette replied, after all there was no point in trying to hide the fact that she had been watching the blonde, who wouldn’t t thoroughly look at that stunning creature anyway?
Tina bit her lower lip briefly before saying anything else that would giver her away.
“Well actually it’s not my first time in a gay club, but it is my first time in this one”
“I see, so I gather that you must be waiting for someone then” Bette said a little bit too disappointed.
“That would be correct, I’m waiting for a couple of friends” Tina lied miserably. She wasn’t lying about this not being her first time in a gay club, but she was lying about her friends showing up at some point. Neither Shane nor Dana, two of her best friends who happened to be gay, knew she was going to be there that night, alone.
Bette thought about it for a moment. This magnificent blonde was waiting for friends, friends being the key word. So maybe she was single and what was the harm in asking to keep a beautiful lady company?
“Would you like some company until your friends arrive?” Bette asked ever so politely.
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No, you can’t stop there! Can’t wait for the next post! PPS
How can you leave us hanging like that? More please and soon please
WOW-eee WOW!
Oh man! Tease! Can’t wait for your next post. Love this story. Thank you.
ooooooooohhhhhhhhh, sooooo sensual. Don’t leave it there! PPS!
Oh my heart is beating, my body aching, just to read the next post.
Love it.PPS
Love the “inner thoughts”…you sure can feel their chemistry.
Wow, oh Wow, I looovvvvee this story. That dance was just absolutely beautiful and your descriptions along with the song captured the moment perfectly. Mercy goodness. Thanks for posting.
I agree with miamigrl, WOW-EEEE! It was such a slow build in the story. That has to be one of the hottest things I’ve ever read. Wow. I really love this fic. I am holding my breath until you post the next chapter.
man this is great..but only half way?.. why not “their lips is touching” hehe. but how you discribe the emotion..is blowing me away..I feel, I’m touched I’ve felt. please more!
Wow! Love your story XD PPS
loved this… i could just see bette’s lips getting closer to tina’s… very nice… but we need more…pps
please hurry up with the next chapter
Great beginning! Hope to read more very soon. Thanks for posting
so sensual so loving
This is so good and love it!
I enjoyed that they are actually talking to each other. Tina asking for what she wants. That dance was smoking. Love it.