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Chapter 47
The Planet Parking Lot – Tina’s Point of View
I have to admit, my faux confidence comes from seeing Bette so tongue-tied at my forwardness. It kinda gets me off knowing that I can undo her just by teasing mercilessly. At the same time, I know my attraction to her is real. I know this because she has the same effect on me when she exudes her own sexual self-confidence and poise.
I can tell that she’s quite used to being desired. Hell, she’s was dancing with TWO women when I first laid eyes on her. Knowing that Bette Porter is probably a professional heartbreaker only intensifies my fascination with her.
“The bedroom tour?”I asked with one lifted brow. “Is that what the Stouts are calling their multi-city show schedule?” I knew exactly what she was referring to, but my pride got in the way of acknowledging yesterday’s half-asleep, half-sober, all-nonsensical ramblings of a girl with her first girl-crush. My question was only answered with a sultry chuckle that made me tingle all over.
As we walked out of the Planet hand-in-hand with our fingers laced as if we had been lovers for quite some time, I couldn’t help but steal glances at her as she strutted with purpose to her sexy muscle car. I parked a few spots away, and the lunch rush appeared to have thinned as there was only one car in between ours.
We got closer to her car and she pulled the keys from her jeans pocket, disengaging the alarm. They must have been uncomfortable, stuffed so deeply into such a tight space. Bette’s ass looked phenomenal in the jeans she wore. She was in such great shape, no doubt due to her morning runs.
Before she could open her car door, I twisted her around by the hand I was holding and pushed her up against it. I pressed my body to hers, before I dropped her hand and ran both of mine through the thick mane of brown waves. I smiled at her, intoxicated by our proximity.
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This was good even without a bedroom tour. I love how connected they are and haven’t even slept together yet. I can do without Jodi! LOL
I liked how Tina thinks they’re not going to get to the Italian restaurant and Bette is thinking, “Spaghetti is served!”! Ha!
I think I´m falling behind here. Too much work and too little time for the pleasurable aspects of life. I am enjoying this amazing story thoroughly, even without the bedroom tour, which I have no doubt will cause a lot of cold showers – afterall the temperature in this part of the world hardly gets above 20C, so a B&T bed-athon just might do the trick.
This story is amazingly good. I like how you gave them different professions except Kit and Angus, yet it seems so true as to who they could be. The use of the main and secondary characters was smart and clever. I along with the rest of the readers are waiting patiently for the pay off. But I know that noone is missing her, but we have Tim in the story, where is crazy Jenny. Go Tibette!!!
At least Tina was able to let Bette know that she did not have the required experience just the hots for a very hot woman. Hopefully in the next post we will get to see Bette test Tina’s mettle and we know she will pass with flying colors of the gay rainbow. Great update. Thanks.
Just caught up…I’m so falling behind :) This story just absolutely gets more and more wonderfully amazing. I so can’t get enough of this and what excellent brilliant writing. Thank you for this story Meloveslu
How comes, every time that I have to read your story, either I have to go for a run, either rain falls?????? Your story is quite very good and very smooth. Now for your information, I can run for hours without getting sweaty!!!!!
Awsome story,even without bedroom tours.Thank you.PPS
Me mother in law read the bit where ette and Tina were makinh out lol. She didn’t say if she liked it but me thinks if comp open and me reading sjhe wontsit next to me lol. I love it thoughreally enjoying the way they seem to already are able to understand each other. Ty :)
Oh mistress you did it again. Smokin and when you compare smokin hot to Jodi… doesn’t even come into the picture with Tibette. Hope you update very soon. I love the way they tease each other.
Bette is understanding b/c she knows at the end no one can resist her for very long. At least, Tina’s first experience will be w/the stunning BP.
That was awesome and love it, glad to see Tina tell Bette she not with a woman before and can’t wait to see her telling Bete about her past relationship. Please post more, thanks!
Meant to tell you that I did notice the second strike regarding a certain character that I don’t like in any way, shape, form, or faction, I don’t even like to write her name and when I do it is always in small case letters. Just waiting for the third strike so she can get the hell out of everyone’s life and out of an otherwise lovely story. Can’t stand the woman, she always appears to be as arrogant as hell and I can’t stand that, if I see that she is in a movie or tv show I won’t even watch it just because she is in it. ’nuff said. Thanks.
I guarantee you would have a best seller maybe even a prestigious award. well if I had any say it would. I can’t wait for more. :)
Love the update! Thanks MeLL! :-) … Lol I noticed about that “Strike Two from Bette” but I just take it as that serves Jodi right! … And yes, I care more with whatever related to Tibette ;-) … What? 38*C?!? oh my!! :-o … Scary!! apply lots of sunblock then!
Just make out w/ Bette Porter, I doubt it (lol). You know what they sag about best laid plans and all… Anyway let me rewind a few chapters since I’m just getting caught up. 1st I hate Tina’s choice in cars, but Bette will have a good influence and maybe Tina will realize that nothing tops a CADDY! I do however lice Tina’s taste in music, NSYNC is awesome and girlfriend is such a great song. I wonder if Tina will realize the hidden meaning behind Bette and Shane’s conversation about spaghetti dinners after she and Bette “eat”. So they are making out on the couch and willing to bet all the money in the world that neither of these ladies are going to be able to slow their engines before getting around to that most anticipated bedroom tour. Keep up the great writing and don’t keep your loyal fans waiting too long for he next update. ;-)