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Random Acts Chapter 4 – Part 4
Just as I had that thought, she turned to me and said Are you ready for me Tina? What do you want me to do? Tell me Ill do anything you want. Just ask.
I was lying in Bettes arms when I heard her ask those questions. I had just finished making love to her. I was trying so desperately to process the experience. I wanted to savor every second of it, replay it in my mind, and remember how she screamed out my name as I brought her to *****. I had never experienced anything more beautiful, more erotic in my entire life. Being with her, being able to touch her beautiful body lit a fire inside me that was now burning so very bright. I felt alive for the first time. I cant explain this but its like I didnt know until this happened that I had been missing something. Ive been reborn today and it is a glorious feeling. Bette interrupts my thoughts, asking if Im okay. Oh, God, I never answered her. She must think Im a total dork.
Im fine Bette, more than fine.
I flash her a smile hoping she will understand just how fine I really am. She still looks concerned; worry lines showing around the edges of her eyes.
Tina, are you really okay? I want to take care of you, tell me what you need.
I reach up and caress her face. Youre beautiful. I say. I could look into your eyes forever.
She looks away for a second, clearly embarrassed by the compliment. Look at me Bette, please?
She turns and I see tears in her eyes. Whats wrong? I ask Did I do something wrong?
No. she says, you did everything right. Ive never come so hard before in my life. Are you sure this was your first time? She giggles, trying to ease the tension that has developed between us.
Most definitely my first, and most definitely not my last. I lean into her and give her a warm, soft, passionate kiss.
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(63 votes, average: 4.48 out of 5)
HOoooootttttttt!!! why am i at work again??
OH GOD….I read it at work…I had to my internet is down at home but now I can’t leave my office for a while
thank you!!!!!!!
You´re back… HOTTER THAN EVER!
Not your best? Are you kidding. Sweet baby Jesus is right! Ahuaaaa!
OK, that was amazing! I forgot to breathe while reading it! Post again soon – you’re the bomb, Chase.
Jesus criminey Chase!!!
Mon dieu !! Chase – I hope you didn’t get it out of your system completely…
Wow Chase you out did yourself with this one..SHit I should know better than to read this at work..LOL Great job
Awesome and beautiful
I was warned but the impulse was to powerful to heed.
I enjoyed this chapter very much.
The last few paragraphs what sank me.
I stopped writing these scenes for it is obvious.
Excellent job.
Now I have to go teach my class.
Chase, your ablility to write this genre is impeccable…I’m soooo blushing, but you know I’m lovin’ every minute because you’re that damn good…hee!
Chase that was so great, I told you you were the shit. So is this the end or will there be more to follow when the mood strikes you? What a great surprise to find today :)
holy shit, i need an ice shower immediately!!!!!where the hell is bette in the real world!!!hot damn!!!!
I could be wrong BUT I think this is the hottest chapter you’ve written; and, most certainly one of the hottest on this site! Thanks for making work seem banal!
If this isn’t one of your best My heart and body couldn’t take the best. WOW. thanks so much
Good god, chase! Are you trying to kill me or rush me to a cold shower?
WERE IS UR GRLFRIEND WHEN U MOST NEED THEM. DAMNIT THAT WAS HOT. NOW I NEED TO GO TAKE A ARTIC COLD SHOWER AND GO TO SLEEP. PLEASE UPDATE. WOW.NOTHING BUT HOTT
have you seen
my ice block? oh, it’s melted…
you gotta be friggin kiddin me!!!
I’m speechless!!!!! That was HOT!!!!
Whoa!!! Super HOT Chase!!!
SO OMG HOT!
Chase – You are amazing as is this story. You Wow Me!!! Thanks for sharing your talents with all of us. Keep ’em coming honey!.
Loved it!
*cough* Can’t…breathe!
**thud**
Excuse me, I have to let the Fire Department in right now…. Smoke everywhere.
Fuck i want some
Yeouch!!! This was hot! *eyebrows are so high and jaw is on the floor* Somebody remind me to breathe…..
WOW…….that’s all I can say…..WOW
P.S. Chase Glad you are back love your writing
Chase–I’m thrilled you posted this. I know better than to read NC17 now but I wanted to congratulate you on your well deserved award and let you know I’ll post a comment related to this update later.
wow cold shower time oh wait I am at work uuuuuu
Oh my god this is so fucking hot and excellent chapter. The love scene of Bette and Tina are amazing and very hot, love it. Please keep coming like this for a while, Thank you!
What a great touch and feel you have. Go girl this was so hot thanks
good god so good i read it twice……
Loved the story and loved this line…only just started Tina, and I want to give you more. Can you handle it baby? Say yes.
Jesus!….*goosebumps* …enough said. lol.
….. NO WORDS….AFTER THAT..OMG so damn HOT.. You have to continue with this story! WOW.. cold shower time…great job!
WOW, HOT
OMG, that was hot!
oooh chase… you know how to heat up the work day
Holy hell- that was so freaking hot!! I don’t think a cold shower could cool me off after that. You need to write more like this!!
As promised I read this and I AM SPEECHLESS This is the hottest thing I’ve ever read. You have to continue this is Two words—-AMAZINGLY HOT!
WOW!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!