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Rebuilding Chapter 5 – Finale
Bette and Tina laid facing one another in the middle of the bed. The sated smiles were apparent on their faces as they had just finished drying one another after a long leisurely shower spent exploring one another’s body. They spent time kissing, and touching one another, reacquainting each other with special places that only the other knew. It was the those spots that they had found together after many years of making love to one another and learning how each reacted to one another’s touch. There was no hesitation, no fear or anxiety. There was love and an unspoken affirmation to their commitment to each other, and to their family.
They lay together, limbs entangled. Tina’s hand gently stroked the length of Bette’s back. Bette reached and tucked a stray strand of hair behind Tina’s ear, and traced her fingers along Tina’s jaw. She leaned and placed a soft kiss on Tina’s mouth. There was nothing hurried or rushed to the kiss. It was slow and sweet, gentle, and filled of hope.
“Mmm, I could get used to this,” Tina murmured.
“You could, huh?”
“I could. I’ve missed you so much. I’ve missed this so much. Spending time together as a family, and spending time with just you, has made me realize how much I want this to work. I want our family to work, but more than anything, I want you. I want you like I wanted you when we first met years ago.”
The smile on Bette’s face grew. “You were insatiable. We barely slept those first few months.”
“Do you think you can keep up? Because I don’t see this beginning being much different.”
“Oh, I can keep up. Are you sure you can?”
“I can keep up. We’re just going to have to be a bit more creative since we have Angie to consider.”
Bette suddenly became serious. Tina saw the change in her face, and pulled Bette closer, hoping to keep her fears at bay.
“T, what’s changed? Why now?”
“Why not now?” Tina asked trying to lighten the mood.
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(40 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
Interest was waning? Oh dear, I just found this story. Thank you for writing, I really enjoyed this story and your alternate ending for 509. I look forward to reading your epilogue and future stories!
“Interest was waning?” I disagree. Looking at the view counts you had strong numbers. I really liked this story, and thought that a solid foundation had been established in order for this story to continue and thrive. I hate to hear that you are ending it. Hopefully, you will reconsider and continue on with it.
this story was great. I like your take on season 5. I agree it was good in Ilene’s version but yours is great. Especially for a first timer. keep it up!
GREAT!
Hmm, obviously I’m on someone else’s computer. Oh well, I’m pretty sure you know who I am. Third day in and it’s going really well! Anyway…back to the story. Thanks for providing an alternate ending. Bette waffling on telling Jodi just didn’t make any sense. I hope you find the time to write more stories soon.
Well QL, I certainly enjoyed the story. I hope you do write an epilogue or perhaps a sequel! Nice NC-17 for a first go!
I loved it too! Really great! thanks!
Perfect
Oh bummer, do you really have to end this story? I was really getting into it. Please continue or consider writing another story.
My interest wasn’t waning I promise, just this pesky thing called work got in the way of timely reading! Thanks for such a beautiful ending, hopefully you will bring us a sequel or another story (maybe you already have and I just have to find it).
What a Great story!!!! I so hope you writ more. Thank you PPS
thank u, lovely story and ending. look 4ward to more.
Interest was waning? I don’t think so, it takes a little time or a few chapters sometimes for a story to catch on. There are so many excellent stories on this site, and this one is one of many and just starting. Please give it a chance, really don’t think you should end it now. Just my opinion. Thanks for posting.
My interest certainly hadn’t waned. This was a really good story, adn I hope you find time to write again soon. Thanks, QL.
Loved it! I could read a happy story about these 2 all day long!! Can’t wait for the next!
i love it and im looking forward to read lots of ur storyes in the furure
Really liked your story! Hope more will folllow….soon!
I just found your story and read all 5 chapters. Really enjoyed it. Hope there is an epilogue or a sequel. Looking forward to more.
That was awesome and hot as ever!