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Savannah – Amber Eyes
Story written on July 22, 2012 by kins40.
She swore time had actually slowed down! There was no way three minutes could really take that long.
Tina was sitting nervously on the edge of the bathtub staring at the seconds tick away on the watch Bette had given her for her birthday last year. Right there in front of her, by the sink on the mahogany vanity, a very important test was developing.
She had been tempted several times to getup and walk the few steps to the sink to take a look but each time she had stopped herself by grabbing tight onto the bath to halt her progression.
Her mind raced while she waited and her thoughts wandered back to the all important pregnancy test she took all those years ago when she was only a teenager.
Back then, the scene had been fairly similar. She had been alone in the bathroom just as she was right now but the difference today was that she was not hiding – well not in the sense she had all those years ago – and back then she certainly wasn’t hoping for the single blue line to transform into a plus sign.
A positive sign.
Back then she had been a foolish if not slightly rebellious and certainly scared 17-year-old girl.
Back then her anxiety and her time tracking obsession had also been for entirely different reasons. She remembered about having to find ways to tell her parents, telling the Jock she had been dating and had dumped her as soon as she had hinted at her predicament, maybe facing her classmates also and the rest of the small traditional, Bible fearing town she lived in.
She had been worried about how to break the news to all the people who surrounded her and were so oblivious to her inner turmoil.
All this did not compare, however to how terrified she had been, then, at the prospect that at such a young age she could become someone’s mother. She knew nothing about motherhood and certainly didn’t have the best example growing up and when she had seen the negative result she had near passed out from the relief and then burst into tears.
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“Sweetheart….. Calm down.” – lol @ Bette panic. Nice one :)
Thank you for the update and for understanding that we all simply love this story about the vet and her lovely wife in Africa. Yes, we look forward to visiting them from time to time with the windows you create for us with your incredible writing. You write brilliantly… please keep it going.
Please write more when you have time,i have really loved this story,thank you so much for posting it.
I have enjoyed your story and writing so much. It is lyrical. Please return when you can. You and your writing will be missed as you go on a small (hopefully) hiatus.
Woman, you can tell a tale. Great story, thanks
I am thrilled to visit these two again; feel free to write about them whenever the urge hits, we will all be happy to see them
Bioutifoul!!! As always… Let’s just say that “La boucle est bouclee” Starts and ends with the cubs, and a whole new cub in the making… Can’t wait for that 2nd sequel (some day) where you’ll come back with that little addition to the family who will stroll in the Savannah and learn all there is to learn from Mama Bette about the wildness. (Sorry about this cinematographic reference but as I’m writing this, I can’t help but think about the beginning of “Crocodile Dundee III” and little Mickey… Yeah, I know!). Anyway, thank you so much for this! And oh God, I so have to reply to that sms of yours, darling! ;) Kisses, Kw
Thank you for this lovely ending. Hope to see you posting when you are ready.
All I can say is WOW! Awesome story.
Have I ever told you how thankful I am that you decided to share your talents with us. If I didn’t…then “THANK YOU”. I will gladly read anything you write. Peace, T.
Wonderful sequel. Lady you really do know how to write a story that tugs at the heart strings from beginning to end. Every chapter you have written has touched me one way or another with the care, respect for each character and loving spirit with which you have embued the story. We love that you like to visit the ladies from time to time and we will be waiting when you return shortly (hopefully.) Thank you so much.
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Simply amazing.Thank you.
Sorry to see this amazing story end, but looking forward to tiny glimpses into their lives now and then.
You can continue this story anytime. We love it!!
Wonderful story and wonderful writing. Love this story. Thank you for a perfect ending.
This is not the end. Its just the beginning.
Sad to see this one end, again, but hopefully we will revisit again, when the baby is due. But I hope that it will not literally be nine months, we could speed up time in FF Land. Maybe in nine weeks or better yet nine days, Just kidding, but I hope we get to see the Vet and her wife soon, along with their offspring.
That was awesome and amazing, love it. Love this story, thanks !
What an amazing story..love this series so much!! Thanks Kins!
I hope you never work them out of your system. They just rock my world too much. Thank you K!!!!😘
i hope you never get them out of your system, i loved the first story and the sequels-looking forward to may more sequels
I hope that you will come back soon with your great writing and a Savannah’s baby.
Wow Kins!!:-) thanks for a wonderful epilogue … The story of Tina with the pregnancy test is so touching! :-) the desperation and despair when she thought its negative is so palpable.. I almost cry. honestly… I thought you will bring the baby on your future installment! But hey! What a joyfull moment!! ;-) and the way she share the news with Bette is so extraordinary and it’s in the sweet way of course :-) and I was LMAO on Bette’s panic reaction :-D …. Hahaha … Anyway Kins, good luck for your project, you’ll be missed for sure.. I hope your small hiatus means not too long for me too :o)x ….. uhmm… And I hope whatever detoxification you took will never ever clear them from your systems :-p lol pardon me for this, but trust me it’s doing more good than not so good thing ;-) and it brings abundance of happiness to your fans when reading your stories :-) so please maintain the Tibette addiction ;-) hehe.. Cheers!:-)
I’ve been offline for a few days, and so just caught up… Wonderful! A bonus round of Amber Eyes, and the door left ajar for additional “visits”! Thank you for this treat!
Wow, Kins! What else can I say other then thank you!!! Great story, great writing. It’s like we were all there with them. I hope you come back soon with another wonderful tale to tell. You write them both so well. Good luck on your other projects and come back soon!
A beautiful epilogue …thank you, and will wait for the next”Inspiration” to come.
Loved every minute of it……from the 1st chapter to the last. You’re an amazing writer. Can’t wait for your return. Thanks!
I’ll never forget this story, one of my favourites. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much for all the time you spend to give people like me (silent reader) hours upon hours of reading enjoyment. You are a fantastic writer and HOPE YOU RETURN WITH A NEW STORY…..sorry if i am being selfish, but i really really enjoy your writing…..Have a nice time off, and hoping you return with something new….once again….THANK YOU…..
Beautiful beautiful ending!!!!
Great loved it, thanks. You are a talented storyteller kins!!!
Loved it even more this time around. So so good.
Loved taking this journey again, can’t believe it’s been 6 years since my previous trip to your Savannah kins.
Thoroughly enjoyed it and as I said before you are a very talented storyteller
SG