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Something so right – chapter 134
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SOMETHING SO RIGHT
CHAPTER 134
The look on Tina’s face was a picture – she stared at the car – complete with ribbon & bow for several minutes before looking at Bette. There were tears streaming down her face – Bette smiled and took hold of Tina
“That’s not how you are supposed to react “
“Bette ! “
“I can never really show you how much I love you – there are not enough hours left in our lifetimes to begin to express the love and happiness that you have given me since you came into my life Tina. So anything I do is never going to be enough – I want you to have the best of everything – and this is the best car I can give you “
Tina flung her arms around Bette and kissed her
“Bette – I don’t know how to thank you “
“I can think of a thing or two I have in mind “
“Thank you – I don’t deserve this “
“You do – do you like the car “
“Bette – an Aston Martin is just my dream car and a DB8 – wow – its fantastic”
Tina pulled Bette closer and they began to kiss – and kiss and kiss
Unbeknown to Bette and Tina – Helena had lead a select few people out to witness the present – Elizabeth, Hannah, Sarah, Peggy, James, Finn and Shane were all standing watching the scene
“That is one fantastic car “ Peggy said “The girl has taste “
“Its beautiful “ Finn “That is a car and a half “
“She’s not letting you drive it “Sarah said “And if she does let you”
“She won’t “ Shane said
“And if your sister is foolish enough to say yes – I am forbidding you “
“Trust me “ James spoke “Bette won’t let anyone but her and Tina drive that baby “
“Where did she get the ribbon ?” Hannah asked “Its not the sort of thing you pick up with a card and some wrapping paper
“THAT ribbon “ James said “Took me six weeks to get . Tina would have had the car sooner but Bette was adamant about the ribbon”
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I love this story! Thank you for posting!
Yer great story and a Aston Martin, well one heck of a gift. AllyE great story and your make words just simply leap of the page with such life. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.
Another great chapter! Thanks Ally.
It’s great to have the AM but Bette is the real prize. Great story
Fantastic chapter AllyE, as always. For those of you interested there is an interview of Jennifer B in the Dec/Jan issue of MORE magazine and she is the cover photo as well, just stunning. Thanks for posting AllyE. Merry Christmas to, Cheryl and your Mom if you don’t post again before then.
Merry Christmas AllyE! I always love to see and read your stories!!!
You´re such an amazing writer. What Sarah said to Tina was spot on. Looking forward to their wedding. Thanks for a great story. Merry Xmas.
wonderful, when will Tina announce the date of the wedding? I wonder what Al’s next move will be? PPS
Raleigh! Hey! Come see us sometime!
Merry Xmas and thank you for all of your great stories.
Thank you for posting. One of my favourite stories on this site.
Hey AllyE, Many thanks for continuing this great adventure. It was so sweet to have Bette declare her love for Tina with this expensive luxury car. Tina’s response was so loving and honest. Then Tina and Sarah had some great mother-daugther discussions about Finn, Shane, Alice and Bette. I do agree with Sarah that Alice’s dislike of Tina comes from Tina taking so much of Bette’s time that Alice feels left out and so has been mean about it. I do hope this helps Tina deal with the situation. I would like Tina and Alice to build their own friendship. More please as this aleways makes me smile. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.