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Temptation 4
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When Bette returned to the dancefloor she stopped in her tracks. Tina was stood with Jodi, and they actually seemed to be getting on for once. She knew she had no option but to approach them, but refused to meet either of their gazes. She never thought she’d say it, but she was actually relieved when Alice returned to the group. At least Alice was never lost for words and so would prevent any awkwardness.
"Ladies, shall we get another drink?" Alice asked cheerily.
"Definitely" Bette replied gratefully, and headed straight for the bar.
Bette ordered a round of beers and rolled her eyes when she felt a hand slowly rubbing her arse. She really couldn’t be dealing with any more of Jodi tonight, it just seemed like every little thing she did would annoy her more and more and Bette felt like she was ready to blow. It was only when she looked to her left and saw Jodi engrossed in conversation with Alice that she felt a tingling sensation run over her body. She felt the errant hand snake round to her hip and looked down. She’d recognise that hand anywhere, and knew that Tina was looking for some kind of reassurance. Although Bette was sure that body had been responding positively, she knew that as yet she hadn’t given off any definite signals. Fully aware that her heart was overriding her mind, not to mention other organs taking control, she bit the bullet and covered Tina’s hand with her own.
Spurred on by Bette’s action, Tina pressed her body against her back. Bette gripped her hand tighter and felt that all too familiar sensation of Tina’s warm breath against her ear.
"Tell me you don’t want me" Tina whispered.
"What?" Bette turned her head slightly in surprise.
"Tell me that you’re in love with Jodi and feel nothing for me"
Bette turned slightly so that her head was next to Tina’s and their eyes met. She took a deep breath before speaking.
"I can’t" she said quietly.
"Oi Bette, pass us those beers over!" Alice’s shrill voice interrupted the moment.
Bette span around, releasing Tina’s hand and slid the beers over to Alice and Jodi. She quickly put some distance between herself and Tina, still unsure of what she was feeling. It was like something had been reawakened inside of her that had been missing for so long. And there was no doubt in her mind that it had been Tina that had been missing. But she just didn’t know what to do.
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ho go tina!! jodi i hate jodi shes so full of herself she doesnt wanna see that bette isnt and will never be in love with her. loveeee the fact that u post 2 chapters in 1 day
wow Tina is really turning up the heat. I love the direction of your story. I must admit though I was happy when Bette and Tina kissed that night in the club, I was a little disappointed that yet again Bette will be vilified for cheating again. Tina is no saint as she also cheating on Helena (bette) and Bette (henry). Yet Bette is the bad one. anyway, I do appreciate authors on this site like yourself that can give us so many variations on the original story. sorry for the rant, that was not really directed to you. I just get passionate about the depiction of these characters on the show sometimes. So please continue soon…..hmmm will Bette go with Tina?
I’m addicted to your story! Wow, this is so good, the angst, the tension, the love. I’m waiting with bated breath to see what happens next!
I love the way you write this story! It’s brilliant! Thanks! I can’t wait for the next part!
Now how could Bette say No to that offer!!I love this story so PPS
Great story!!!talk about sexual tension… WOW!
I’d say when are you leaving. Jodi is oblivious, trust me I would notice if Bette was gone, or Tina. Love the teasing, these two are gonna kill each other.
Say yes please say yes! PPS
they are two hot, seeing it on the screen and even reading the words. PPS
Woooow !! My !My ! Please say “Yes” ! Great writing ! PPS ;-)
Oh my, Bette had better say YES. She doesn’t want Jodi, she doesn’t even want Jodi to touch her. She wants Tina. She needs to tell Jodi goodbye forever. Tina and Bette can work this out. Please let them. Thanks for posting twice today. PPS
WOW!!! Way to go Tina!!! I hope Bette tells her no, but tells her that she is going to break up with Jodi and will see her maybe later or the next day. Thanks PPVS Great Story!!!
Hahaha…I know what Bette should say! I like the way Tina is going after Bette without actually making Bette’s decision for her. It shows that Tina really wanted Bette, that she really recognized that Bette was the love of her life. Looking forward to the next update!
Nice one Tina! Say YES Bette! :) I love this story. PPS :)
Love this…the tension, the desperation, the stolen glances…wow. You certainly have me hooked!
I would say go for it.
Go Tina, Go Tina, Go Tina! I am so looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Hey BB, Say “YES!”. Bette please say “yes”. That was so full of potential: Bette and Tina just can’t keep away from either other. They just complete each other like the last piece of a jigsaw suddenly the whole is there to enjoy and find pleaseure in. It is very telling that Jodi is oblivious to all that is going on. i am sure the rush of bathroom breaks would be a dead giveaway. Just can’t wait to find out where this adventure leads to next so please post soon. Muany, many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
where is the next post…we need more of this. pps
great story…this is the kind of temptation i don’t mind Bette having
Oh Tina, you go girl!