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    The Burning Wheel. 6

    Story written on August 27, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lf.beardesk.com/?p=66709
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    Over and done…….everything new…

    The Burning Wheel. 6

     

     

     

     

     

    Part Three: The Heart’s Filthy Lesson

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Spent the whole day thinking of her. Thinking of her soft lips, mind flashing to the wanting look in her eyes. Mind wandering to her, thinking of you, thinking of you, thinking of you. Three times I wandered around in circles. I felt stupid and giddy and tired, most of all what I felt was a foreboding, a sense that something was turning on the horizon. That it was all to perfect, my want and need of her, my desire to know the true things about life with her, to know her heart, what made her blood pump, what made her move and sing and these other nonsensical things that eroded my perception.

     

     

     

    And just what the fuck does that mean really?

     

     

     

     

     It means that somewhere in my heart I knew she was going to destroy something in me. What it was I didn’t know then. But I knew, there was something. There was always something, and there will always be something. That’s just the way some things are.

     

     

     

     

    But on to the moment to me getting home. To me getting ready. Foolish, filled with longing and lust and hope against the belief that I had in no hope. Yes…….foolish….

     

     

     

    The food arrived. Pasta, salad, wine. I learned from Bette Porter that the dish of Penne and basil with melted mozzarella was Carmen’s favorite. The food smelled wonderful, there was a nice oil lamp I got at the last minute from the bazaar, there was nice music playing, a nice sweet bottle of wine. Everything was beautiful…perfect.

     

     

     

    I showered changed and I waited. And I waited and I waited. Reading a book I found in the abandoned library. The book was filled with nice soul searching poems. Bits and pieces of feelings that where so put together that I couldn’t just call them words, they reached out and grabbed me tugging me down with them. The book helped me pass the time and I eventually fell asleep.

     

     

     

     

    Thou art fair my love…….

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    5. Heyyy! As soon as I left a comment on the previous part, this new one is posted. Awesome!! Okay, so I read it and I’m fricken glad Tasha got stabbed in the throat. What a maniac! (I mean Tasha, not me) So that was the truth. What a fucked up society. What a fucked up way of finding out the truth. Well, I guess there isn’t a nice way of finding out that your family was slaughtered (by the woman you love, or with her help, at least) and you’ve lived a complete lie in a barbaric society disguised as Utopia. Grrr, someone needs to bring that place down, Stage 5-style. But there has to be more to the truth, right? I mean, what’s The Underground? (okay, okay, don’t tell me. I’ll just read on.) Awesome update. * * * * *

    7. Smelt something dark tention but I failed to reach out your intention. You’ve done great, really great!!! I don’t think that all of trues revealed at that time. Thank you and make me in shock please.

    8. How do you even wrap your head around that kind of information…the woman you’re in love with had a hand in slaughtering your family. I mean where do you even go from there, never mind that she’s confessed her love for you. I am so into this future-world you have created…who are the rebels and what/who are they rebelling against? I have a million questions and I can’t wait to read the answers!!!

    9. WOW WOW WOW~~` It’s not enough any compliments or 5 and more stars to comment at this chapter. I couldnt breathe at Carmen’s secret. Awesome!!!!!

    10. OMG! That was fucking amazing! I can’t believe that Carmen killed her. I hope Shane is alright. Wow that was some secret Carmen has been hiding! Great update! FIVE STARS *****

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