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The Girl Who Changed My Life 28: I need you
Bette, Tina and Alice all approached the couple standing by the wall, and Alice coughed loudly. Shane turned round and smiled.
“Hey guys, what’s up?”
Dana stood there wide-eyed, clearly unaware of what to make of the situation.
“Well it seems I’m missing out here” Alice protested “you’ve been getting down with all three of my ladies here…”
Shane grabbed Alice and kissed her firmly. She backed her up against the wall and pushed their bodies together, before breaking away, smiling.
“Happy now?”
“Yeah” Alice was a little breathless.
“This is sooo surreal” Tina was looking around.
“I take it you’ve never been to an all womens party before?” Shane laughed.
The women all shook their heads.
“Nothing like this anyway” Alice was still in shock from the kiss.
“Well here, anything goes. There are no rules, no codes of conduct. You just do whatever you feel” Shane explained “It suits me just fine”
“I can imagine it would” Bette commented, still a little angry about the power Shane had had over her earlier.
“Guys, you all gotta lighten up” Shane grabbed a beer off a nearby girl and downed it.
“Well these two certainly have, they just had ***** in the bathroom” Alice smiled at Bette and Tina.
“Now that’s what I like to hear” Shane grinned.
Bette and Tina stood there, looking extremely embarrassed. Dana’s cheeks also turned red.
“Now come on ladies, let’s part-ay!” Alice exclaimed.
They all just laughed, and found themselves another drink from the supply. Tina and Alice had a downing competition in which Alice emerged victorious, just. The women moved into another room which just seemed to be a mass of sweaty bodies. As the music was pounding, the bodies were grinding together. Bette grabbed hold of Tina and pulled her into the crowd. Alice shrugged, took Dana’s hand and they danced near the edge of the group.
You know I don’t see nothing wrong
With a little bump and grind baby
You know I don’t see nothing wrong
With a little bump and grind baby
Bette’s arms snaked round Tina’s waist and she held her body close. She pushed her thigh between Tina’s legs and started to grind her body to the rhythm of the music.
You know I don’t see nothing wrong
With a little bump and grind baby
You know I don’t see nothing wrong
With a little bump and grind baby
Tina held Bette’s back tightly as she placed her mouth next to her ear and moaned softly. She could feel her body growing hot, and pushed herself hard against Bette’s thigh.
Sit down on the couch
Take your shoes off
Let me rub your body
Before I tear off
Tina’s fingers gripped Bette’s back tighter as Bette increased the pressure she was applying with her thigh. She licked Bette’s earlobe seductively and allowed Bette to feel her hot breath.
“God baby I’m so wet” Tina breathed.
“You think you can come like this?” Bette pressed her thigh harder against Tina’s crotch.
“***** yeah”
Bette moved her hands to Tina’s arse and pulled her even closer. Tina lifted her head and stared into Bette’s eyes, her mouth open in want. Her breathing was ragged as she clutched Bette’s back.
Girl flex it
Time to have *****, yeah
Tina lay her head on Bette’s shoulder to muffle her moans. She dug her fingers into Bette’s back and bit her shoulder. When she was sure she wasn’t going to moan anymore, she lifted her head and looked back into Bette’s eyes. She kissed her firmly, her tongue pushing its way into Bette’s mouth.
“You okay, T?” Bette smiled.
“I just came in a room full of people” Tina whispered in Bette’s ear.
“I know, it was hot”
They kissed again, this time more gently. Tina took Bette’s hand and led her back to the living room.
“I think I need a drink after that” Tina grinned, and opened another beer.
Bette watched as Tina downed her beer and reached for another.
“You’re gonna feel like ***** in the morning” Bette warned.
“Will you take care of me?”
“You know I will”
Tina smiled and took a long swig of beer. They were soon joined by Alice and Dana.
“You guys, this place is sooo cool” Alice plonked herself down next to Tina.
“You having a good time, Dana?” Bette asked, motioning for Dana to sit beside her.
“Yeah…wow…”
Bette laughed and put an arm round Dana. She rolled her eyes as Tina challenged Alice to a rematch of their downing competition. This time it was definitely a draw, but Bette didn’t want Tina to drink too much more so she swore to them that Tina finished a second earlier.
“You’re just biased” Alice complained.
“My fiance and my best friend…I think you’re on pretty even ground” Bette pointed out.
“Yeah, I’m sure Tina did win that one” Dana piped up, having caught on to Bette’s plan.
“Whatever, I want a rematch”
“T?” Bette looked at Tina warningly.
“You know, I think I feel a little sick. Can we just leave it at one-all?” Tina was starting to look a bit pale.
“Sell out” Alice muttered under breath.
Bette shot a glare at Alice and turned to Tina “I think I should get you home”
“Maybe that’s a good idea” Tina stood up and swayed.
“Come on” Bette got up and put an arm round Tina to steady her “we’ll see you guys later”
“I think we’ll call it a night too, you up for leaving Dana?” Alice asked.
“Yeah, sure”
They headed out of the front door and into Bette’s car.
“You ladies want a lift?” Bette offered.
“You sure you’re okay to drive?” Alice asked.
“I had like two beers a couple of hours ago, I’m fine”
“Okay, sure”
They got in and Bette dropped Alice and Dana at their respective homes. By the time she pulled into her drive, Tina was passed out in the passenger seat. She sighed, and walked round and opened the passenger door. She picked Tina up in a cradle fashion and carried her to the door. It required some manouvering to open the door, but she managed and carried Tina to the bedroom, where she laid Tina down on the bed.
“Thank you” Tina whispered.
“Oh, so you are awake?” Bette said in mock anger.
“Mmm…not for long” Tina settled herself under the covers and fell asleep.
Bette smiled and stripped down to her underwear. She sat on the bed by Tina and watched her sleep. Stroking her cheek, she leant down and kissed her on the forehead.
“I love you” she whispered.
Tina murmured in response, and Bette proceeded to pull off Tina’s outer layers of clothing. When she’d fetched Tina some water and tucked her in, she finally climbed into her side of the bed.
“Goodnight baby” she whispered.
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(48 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
Glad you found an outlet and sharing your active imagination with us. HAPPY NEW YEAR… you write well by the way.
Damn… You’re 18? Wow. You have one hell of an imagination. Thanks for the HOT story.
Wow you’re 18! What a hot writer and wonderful writing! Keep coming can’t wait to see the next chapter, thank you! YOUR THE BEST, HAPPY NEW YEAR!
You have a vivid imagination,just to be 18. You writing is so mature. Thanks happy2005
And what a lovely imagination it is!! Thanx for the update…. Hope you had a great New Year!! :)
Can’t believe ur 18. The writing is so unbelievable and mature, the charactures so rounded, and the sex is so hot. Course, the speed at which you write has all of us oldies stuggling to keep up just reading. Excellent story
Yes, you do have an active imagination, and I love what you come up with. Thanks for the update.
you are 18? if i were impress before, now I’m just speechless, maybe except for one word… Daaaaaaaaamn
I love you……hehehehe