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The Performance of a Lifetime – Chapter 10
In their search for a place where they could talk in private Tina and Bette walked away from the house in the opposite direction from the pool. Silently they followed the same path they had taken before during the foot paper. Only this time neither of them paid any attention to the scenery around them. The beauty of old trees with leaves waving in the wind, green turned golden by the Sunlight filtering through couldn’t find a place amidst their troubled thoughts.
Tina turned her head discreetly to regard the woman at her side. Bette was easily one of the most gorgeous women she had ever laid eyes upon, which considering what she did for a living wasn’t an easy feat, but that wasn’t what drew Tina to her. It was part of it; of course, Tina was honest enough to admit that she was wildly attracted to the brunette. That was actually the easiest part to acknowledge, physical attraction was nothing new or particularly disturbing and it certainly wouldn’t cost her any sleep.
What scared her was that she cared about Bette. She wanted to breach the wall the brunette had placed firmly around her heart, reach inside, find the bruised places in Bette and hold them tenderly in her hands until it all stopped hurting.
Bette was lost deep in thought. When she had imagined the wedding and she had spent enough time musing about it, she had never, never, even in her wildest thoughts conceived of what was in fact happening. She glanced at Tina out of the corner of her eyes. The blonde was stunning and tremendously sexy. Just the fact that she had noticed that from the first moment she had met her had been a surprise to Bette. For months she had felt like her perception of the world around her had been dulled, even before she and Jodi had broken up. And then Tina had entered into her world and made an impression, had grabbed her attention and jarred her senses, suddenly everything around her was brighter, brighter than she could ever remember it all being. Tina smiled and it was like the Sun had just broken through the clouds. Bette loved to make her smile.
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(55 votes, average: 3.84 out of 5)
Whoa! I love this story so much. It is just fantastic. You have a real gift. Please post again soon. The only problem with this story is the long wait in between posts =) Everything else is amazingggg!
OMG, I think I stopped breathing. DAmn this is good. Hope then don’t lose the momentum once they get away from everyone. A update faster would be better please.
This story keeps getting better and better. Ay dios mio si se pone mas caliente estallo.
Absolutely Marvellous !!! Tango is such a sexy dance !!The perfect dance for Tibette, you wrote it so good !! Excellent.The next post will be NC-17 I hope lol ! thx , pps, you’re talented !
“Oh yeah” is it hot in here or is it just me? :) Excellent chappy!
Wow what a great chapter, really looking forward too the next chapter.
OMFG ! That was one L of a tango !! And so much for catching up on sleep tonight Tina… LOL !!! Sabina, I must confess this is the first time that I read one of your stories ( thanks to my friend Kword75 who told me marvellous things about your writing ) and how can I put this ? Well, I started reading ” The performance of a lifetime ” last night and today I’ve caught up on all 10 chapters. I guess that says a lot about how much I enjoy this fabulous fanfic of yours, doesn’t it ? Really, this is both really fun, gripping and delightful to read. I’m loving this ! Please post an update soon, I can’t wait !!
holy shit… and now i have to go to work… you did a great job with them dancing.. i could picture them doing it… dammmmmm girl that was hot… not lets get to the NC17… we/they have earned it… lol… PPS
Great, very great chapter especially the dirty tango!!! waiting impatiently for their next moves….oh yeah, screw jodi.
OMG…you are absolutely masterful! That was incredibly sensuous. I love the way you write these two. The story premise is unique and fun. The only thing that I could wish for that I don’t have is another update ASAP!
Oh my goodness, i don’t know the tango….but oh how i want to now!! Love how descriptive you are, i feel like i’m right there with the gang watching this beautiful beginning for our girls ;) Thx & can’t wait to see their destination & what happens next!!!
Kit’s not the only one fanning herself… I’m looking for a cigarette and I don’t smoke! Sweet baby Jesus that was sexy. I feeling love drunk just thinking about the next chapter. Now that’s the way to start the weekend!!
Wonderful. Simply wonderful. Keep on keeping on.
OMG that was hot!! they can continue the tango elsewhere !! :)PPS
Beautiful, simply beautiful. More, please?
oh. my. god. that was completely fabulous, the whole chapter, but that tango… speechless. You’re doing such a great job with this, sabina. Thanks so much for the posts.
NOOOOOOOOO……….Jodi needs to step her ass on back!!!!!! wow…i am completely captivated by this story….i hope you post another chapter SOOOOON!! LOL…thanks Sabina
I can’t wait for another chapter.
beautifull… I’m such a fan of this story so I hope you’ll post soon
This gets better by the chapter. MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
Sabina, excellent stuff and even if they are just dancing you can feel the heat.. just love it.. please post sooner than soon (ha-ha). I am addicted to this story.
OMG… I think I want to learn the Tango. PPS
ONE OF THE BEST TIBETTE SCENES IN FANFIC HISTORY!!!! And believe me, you have an expert here! I’ve read a lot (a loooooot!) of Tibette fanfic, and for a long time I had been waiting for such a hot dance between B&T (Tango is one of the sexiest dances I agree). As a matter of fact, when I first heard of a Tibette dance in 512, I hoped that it would be a tango or a dance of the kind. Okay, 512 was not disappointing in the least but I must admit that you made a strong wish come true with this chapter. How fabulous, and so well done!!! Sabina, you had the greatest idea when you decided to start writing on this site. You are very talented and this fanfic is pure delight. Thanks a lot for this story, a special kuddos for this chapter, and I can’t wait for the next update and the continuation of this beautiful tale. PPS!
That was wonderful (Doing a happy dance!!!) PPS
I’m speechless! That was just fantastic!
Simply beautiful, this story is my most favourite and I wish u would post everyday :)now can’t wait for the next chappy;)
Oh, Sabina a million THANK YOU’s for giving me a second dance. They were so in-sync while dancing at the bar when they first met, I just wanted it to go on and on…this topped that scene and was so well crafted. I could hear the tango music in my head as I read the story. You are truly a master. I echo others… more soon. I believe I hear the bedroom calling them.
That was superb and it should have been an NC-17 because of the hot dance. That was a perfect venue for them and I would love to see them do that dance on the show. You wrote it perfectly. And to hell with Jodie. She walked away, her loss. PPS
Wow that was hot! can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS
fantastic story. WHEW!
Oh good gracious alive, that was beyond hot. I could picture those two dancing to the sensual music and starting a wild fire. Better make sure that the fire can put out or at least enjoyed. I bet where ever they are headed will be left scorched from the flames that flew from their bodies.
H.O.T!
OMG!! That was HOT! Can’t wait for the next chapter and I hope it is really, really soon!!
I thought the hand touching was plenty, but the tango–holy cow. If I smoked, I’d need a cigarette. Heck, you may have driven me to start smoking.
OMFG!!!!! That was just HOT!!!!! So amazing!!!! Thank you PPVS
SIZZLIN’ HOT! WHOO-EE! I am…you got me girl! :)
Damn, you are such a tease to stop here, pps, I am dying here!
That´s what i call dancing…wow…but please…post soon…more “dancing” =)
This chapter was totally smokin’ the dance of hotness, the Tango is one sexy dance..more please. Thank you.
I love this story so much and you are just so brilliant. Thank you, post sooooooon.
Daaammmmmnnnnn! That was HOT!
wow, i imagined the dance and it was hot, hot, hot…jodi should step off and leave bette alone
are they there yet??? hehehehePPS
I have been thoroughly enjoying your story! Post soon!
This is such a great story,but stop keeping us hanging on edge i need to know what happens
gaah… I just caught up with this story and am left speechless :o I love the storyline, life imitating fiction indeed :) tibette are meant to be, no matter the circumstances under which they meet. Bette might have thought she had the real thing with Jodie but boy is she gonna get her eyes opened by the lovely Ms Kennard *love*Hope Jodie figures out what the hell it or rather who it is that she wants before she ends up hurting Janet too… although it might already be too late for that :(
Well, that definitely put Mario Lopez and Karina Smirnoff’s dancing to shame. As for the musical error, no worries. I missed it. LOL