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The Promise
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perfection + InShane + polarice – Yeah 934 is alot…but let’s be real, bette was a total ***** in s1
bvhall – your way is the best way
m_rave – to come up with 934 I took Bette’s age and multiplied it by JB’s real age. then I subtracted Shanes age and divided by Kate’s….or i just hit three buttons that were over the previous number written. I just wanted to show a time progression babe…I’m deep but that deep?
shy – Alice isn’t all that together in the morning and Shane’s too oblivious to…oh just read you’ll see
confussed – hey man i might think bette was creepin too! I don’t know what i would do if someone cheated on me and i took them back…there’;s always that nagging question cause now you know they are capable of doing it.
Janet M – so I’m wicked aye? you are such a New Englander….French my *****!
maybeyes – thanks luv I see where you’re going and we will get there soon…together I hope. and the number 69 for Shane because who else would get that priveledged spot in her speed dial? after all Tina is #1!
Seven – It was a compliment…but when I type …I don’t know I think it came out wrong…I type the way i talk, hence all the “…” for my pauses…anyway so I meant thanks for giving it both ways…and yeah I can’t spell for ***** cause I just spell it the way I say it. its/it’s and your/you’re, their/they’re i never put them in right…I KNOW the difference, but my fingers don’t. thanks luv no hard feelings aye.
lwordjunkie + Nix – thanks guys …and saturday will come soon enough…but don’t expect it ON saturday :) sorry, I’ll try to slack off at work and write.
Chapter 25
Tonight with words unspoken
You said that Im the only one..
the only one
but will my heart be broken?
When the night meets the morning star
Id like to know that your love is love I can be sure of
so tell me now
cause I wont ask again
will you still love me tomorrow? –
exert from will you still love me tomorrow sung by Amy Winehouse courtesy of ACEOFHEARTS
Alice woke to the smell of coffee and sweet whispers in her ear. She smiled to herself as she felt Shane nibbling on her earlobe. Shane nudged her ear with her nose and kissed her cheek.
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Bette and Tina are in a world of trouble. I love this Bette.she is so playful with Shane. Seems to love Father Joe. Tina and Alice iis in for something. Think it will be at the church. Thanks so much for Posting.
Alice don’t want to hear the name “Bette” from Shane’ lips and Shane is as blind than Bette about their girls… I hope it’ll be not so easy for Bette and Shane to get back who they want… “just only to read more of this story”.
This chapter was a little short but thanks and can’t wait next chapter.
I forget : 5***** for you…
Thanx so much for another great update…. will eagerly wait for Saturday as long as I have to (just please don’t make it too long) :)
~shakes my bootie anxiously waiting for the next chapter~ Loving this, damn Shane can be a blind gal can’t she!
lo-vin this!!!! u manage to capture the charecters purrrfectly!!
what wonders will saturday bring…… *wink*
Five Freckin awsome stars for uuuuuu!!
you got me hooked…can’t wait to read what shane and better have in store for their ladies….
OHHH yes.. sing priases in the morning…anything for shane!!!! great post.. thanks for the little sumthin sumthin..wanting more..”picking up the tiny morsals…JLO left behind” take care post soon.
You sure do love to draw out the drama, but I like your style just the same. I hope the coffee meeting chapter is longer, as I love their B&S interactions when they’re by themselves.
Ok this is crazy and hope Alice will understand later. Post soon, thank you!