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The Promise
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Janet/nix/c-fone – Tease? Moi? Never…Im just a drama queen thats all.
M_rave – your damn right its gonna have to hold you over, esp. when Im up all night talking back and forth with you and Shy.
Bvhall – dont worry, Dash wont tell. Things will go fine…trust me Muah hahahah!
Cabecou – nice to hear ya thanks for the comments, and Ill get you more!
Anam8- four hours?!?! youre a fast reader then me! It took me forever to read through aceofhearts stuff last night. But thanks for reading luv.
Incendiary – please No Ashlee Simpson! There will be so much more ***** drama to come.
Chapter 33
And I almost had you, but I guess that doesnt cut it…and I almost had you, but I guess I didnt tknow it. Almost by Bowling For Soup
Shane stood before the group of teens with her arms crossed.
Shane: Look…were going hard and fast today cause I need to get out of here…If you cant go on, move to the back and take a seat…no worries, just hop back in when youre ready…I dont want you getting hurt cause youve got a stubborn ego.
Shane went to work and brought the class through a grueling pace. She always kept the air off in the room because learning in extreme conditions prepared you for anything.
Halfway through the session, she turned around realizing she was lost in her own thoughts, and saw only nine of the original twenty standing. The only other missing was Dash. Shane went back to work on the flying back crescent kick. She continued to jump and spin in the air while the few remaining behind her struggled to lift off the ground.
@}~~~~~
Dash stood at the base of the church steps looking up. She groaned as she thought of the climb before her. For some reason she had been exhausted all day, and was struggling to breathe. Suddenly she found herself flying in the air and turned to see Van had swept her off her feet in one fluid motion.
Van: Just thought Id bring the mountain to Mohammad.
Dash laughed and shook her head.
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you are such a drama queen…. love this story and where you are taking it….when are we getting to sat???? hurry
When you bring on the drama, you really do bring on the drama. :) As long as it all works out I’m a happy camper…. thanx so much for a great update! :)
I’m speechless. Well if shane try to commit suicide before it was for nothing compare for the fuck up thing that are now. Such Drama. She’s really not lucky. People always think the wrong side of what happen to her, jumping to conclusion way to fast. I just hope that she will be able to make Alice understand. I just Al will not end up with Van. Cause for him it will only be a reason te hurt Shane a little more. I’m so loving this story, need a new fix
no no no no no no…you gofrom romantic to tease and now back to drama queen!!!! i just could love you!!!(if my girl wasn’t the jealous type..of course!!)adios y besos
Oh wwhat a tangle web we are weaving, Bette has every one in trouble. Shane has been slaped Alice is very angry, Tina is killing mad. James is james and Poor Dash, she is so smart for such a young age, and Why does Van hate shane? okay I’m done. thanks enjoyed it More
Oh the drama!! love your work Jlo. Can’t wait for next chapter.
oh my fuckin god. you’re amazing
ohhh the drama… more soon? I’m still enjoying this story you keep me hooked, and I just looooveee dash! ~off to work~
Talk about a huge twist in the road that I wasn’t expecting. Sooooo well written and you know of course I can’t wait for more.
Wow this is unbelievable and awesome story, man you are good. This is a crazy day for Shane, I don’t know how’s she gonna handle it. Please post soon, thank you! Excellent jop, 5 stars for you!