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The Roommates: Chapter Seventeen
Previously~~~~~~~~~
Tinas eyes were still closed and her voice was quiet. Hes not even why Im really so upset.
What do you mean?, asked Betted, running her thumbing lightly over the back of Tinas hand.
Tina opened her eyes slowly and turned her head towards the sound of Bettes voice. Tears slid down the side of her face and sorrow blanketed her gaze. Bette, its not about EricI think Im pregnant.
Bette felt her jaw drop and her heart sink with Tinas words. She stared into Tinas eyes and willed herself to find something remotely supportive and sensitive to say.
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Bette felt her senses slowly begin to unthaw as Tinas last words hung in the air around them. There was a swirl of emotions assaulting the caramel colored womans spirit. The emotion most apparent was sheer devastation. She knew that she and Tina werent a couple and she also knew that her first true love had been intimate with Eric. She knew these things, yet she wasnt prepared to come face to face with the consequences of their union. The knowledge that Tina could be pregnant with Erics child shattered the false hopes that Bette had unwittingly been holding on to. In the recesses of her mind, the beautiful dark-haired beauty held Tina in the highest regard. Bettes subconscious loved the burdened blond unabashedly and was patiently awaiting the day the two could be wholly together. This knowledge of a potential life, created out of the miserable combination of angst and desperation that was Tinas current reality, shook the core of Bettes subconscious and sent all of her preconceived notions crashing into the abyss around her.
Jealousy chased anger. Anger chased sympathy. Sympathy chased compassion. Compassion found love and love melted Bettes heart and compelled her to snap out of her daze and comfort the woman that still owned her troubled heart.
Pregnant?, Bette asked, her voice breathless, her mind still trying to connect the meaning of this word with the blond lying beside her.
Tina nodded and looked away. Pregnant., she repeated.
Tears filled Bettes dark brown eyes. She knew she was supposed to be the strong one and she had no idea where the tears came from, but they had a mind of their own. Oh, T., she said, gripping Tinas hand even tighter and trying to still her own emotions.
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(89 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Have just caught up with your story, brilliant and superb, also a big thank you for how quickly you post your chapters…
Oh boy…the drama just intensified…you rock girl…powerful writing…love and passion!
“It’s too bad this couldn’t be your baby.” Wow, now if that doesn’t say they’re already together, I don’t know what does. But, to make it official would be good. Now with Eric out of the picture, somewhat, maybe Bette can finally make up her mind, who she wants to be with. Please post soon. But, just know that is can’t be soon enough. Thanks, though.
oh man.. poor Tina.. maybe she’ll have a miscarriage? what will this do to her and Bette?
wow and the surprises keep coming please post another chapter soon.
Oh no….didn’t see that coming. Can’t wait to see how the story unfolds!
You have me so hooked. I think you’re gonna have to produce two chapters a day. Supply & Demand. Holla
OMG…okay i could really use another update tonight…this is too good to only get 1 a day…come on…please…..
Wow! Really really good chapter! You’ve got me hooked for sure!Post more soon!
I’m so hooked on this story!!! Please don’t keep us in suspense!!!
Damn pregnant man this is really interesting and excited story I want to read. What are they going to do, man this is bad and scary, hope they will figure out what they have to do with it. Excellent chapter, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
“This knowledge of a potential life, created out of the miserable combination of angst and desperation that was Tina’s current reality, shook the core of Bette’s subconscious and sent all of her preconceived notions crashing into the abyss around her.
Jealousy chased anger. Anger chased sympathy. Sympathy chased compassion. Compassion found love and love melted Bette’s heart and compelled her to snap out of her daze and comfort the woman that still owned her troubled heart.”
THAT is incredible writing!
I’m in awe…really!
I amhe so addicted to this story. Please post soon.
Do you realize that because of this story and “Foolish Moves” I’m checking this site every hour looking for new stories. I’m addicted to so many of the stories here. I’ve read a lot of amazing B/T stories but this one is by far the most addictive I’ve personally read. Hurry up and get these two together already…lol.
Keep up the amazing story you’re doing an incredible job!
Noooo! Wow you keep surprising me. Great chapter I love the line, about jealousy chasing anger, etc ending in compassion. Really beautiful yo’re doing a great job. Congrats.
I have class in the morning but I stayed up to read this story. As the story progress it’s getting better and more intense.
4:45 a.m. and couldn’t sleep…must have used my spidey senses to know you posted! All caught up [love the frequency of your posts, btw!] with the story and as always, excellent work!! [handing you a No-Doz and Red Bull to crank out more, more, MoreThan Satisfied!
can’t wait for more am loving your story, great drama, i hope they find a way to be tog..:)
I love the way your write and your imagination sure is working overtime. These twists and turns are most excellent.
Well shite, this is not what I was hoping for. Another zinger.
*fainted*………………………………………*sat up suddenly* Holy SHIT ! I forgot to comment…great job, great chapter. Thank you…..*fainted again*
I am so impressd that you have come up with yet another b & t beginning. I love this one!
omg!!! it cant be!!
thans for posting so soon. I am addicted to this story
alright you guys , get some beauty sleep!!have to say that was a surprise.. didnt expect that. what a story its unreal, thanks mts, cheers!
*falls off chair*
holy shit it’s positive…this should be interesting.
Oh my god, my jaw is still on the floor…. can’t believe you left us with such a cliffhanger! ;) Please post again soon!! =0)
Pregnant…..damn!
Oh my god. Been there seen the 2 lines. What are they going to do now?
No Way. I can’t be. They are gonna have a hell of a time. Well maybe it could be wrong you still got that .1% left, right.
Run, Bette, run!
Really, though, thanks for posting another chapter in the continuing saga of the roommates. I guess they could keep the baby in the dorm room with them?
Oh my God this is going me Crazy WOW I don’t no what to say I can feel the they gonna be okay for Tina if she pregnant Bette is her for her thank you for this good story Nice.
ERIC!! That bastard!! LoL…Love this piece…update soon please:-D
Tina…take another one…those things can be wrong sometimes…please let it be wrong
Ok I now have people at work addicted to this story!!! She can’t be pregnant!! Ya killin me here!!! I love the story, great job!!! But please no baby YET!!! :)
Posative! Crapness in suits! What are they gonna do? oh I want Bette and Tina to be together… :( pretty please!
WHAT!?! NOOOOOO! Will Bette & Tina EVER be together and HAPPY? I am totally addicted to this story, please post again soon.
NOOOOOOOOO…………
Help….I can’t breath……
I’m too upset to get a sleep now…it’s 1.30am… when r u gonna post another one?? Pls post soon.. :(