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The Suicide Note
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The highlights of morning start to peak at the horizons edge. The shadows surrender to the light but not without first leaving their long dark secrets across the pavement for that one last chance. Only letting in little bits of light, reluctant reluctant to give way but knowing it is time.
Un uomo saggio si preoccupa non per quello che non pu avere. But even the wise can not shut out the pulsing throb of a beating heart to stop from caring, to stop from loving whether it can be had or not. The heart will care, will love when it is open. All the while forgetting those shadows that are lingering, that had been rescinded by the light, and that time will not stop them. Tick. Tock.
When the light, that little bit of light that was known would only stay a short while, bursts into flames taking the heart like Pompeii into an eternal grave to the bottom of a cold, dark ocean.
It leaves only the self loathing and self combusts engulfing a life, sucking out the oxygen till nothing is left but three empty pharmacy bottles on the table and the broken shards of glass across the floor. As I look across the city into the sky seeing those watery, big brown eyes decorate the sky… I can feel nothing else but the tremendous pain I caused… the dismantled love that rocked us both… and I cant help but hear myself whisper, I loved you.
Marina seals the letter scribbling her beloveds name and walks to the roofs edge. The pills filling her head with voices, whispers, all calling her name. She yells it into the air with torment dripping with each syllable as it passes her lips. The early morning pedestrians look up at a Marina teetering on the edge.
Marina looks into the sky, into Jennys eyes and going over the edge, cries out, Jeeeeeennnnnnyyy.’
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poeting suicide note I might say.
I always found it difficult to understand why someone like Marina would even be interested in Jenny, but it was sweet. I find the idea of Marina committing suicide over Jenny completely out of character and downright silly. She would be more likely to just find Jenny and convince her as she does so well,in person. That being said – I agree with GR that you expressed the pain that a person might feel, quite eloquently. You’re good – write some more things.
This is perfect insight into the mind of a person contemplating or committing suicide. As for what it is that Marina saw and found in her Jenny. Well now, there’s their love of literature, Jenny’s appernt shyness, and last but not least let us not forget Those “EYES”, the eyes. It was that scenes in the pilot episode when Marina first saw Jenny pass by her cafe window and then at the party where the official meeting took place. It was then apparent when the two of them LOCKED EYES, they were both absolutely mesmerized. I believe at that very moment that both Marina and Jenny’s heart opened up to love..SayTMMONEY will you be kind enough to tranlate that language that you started the note off with.(lenab41@yahoo.com) Just in case I didn’t mention it, You have done a nice job with this. It can be really difficult to determine what or how someone thinking or feeling when it boils down to them deciding try suicide. It is clear to me that you would be someone that a person could turn to in a time of “NEED”. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! hOPE TO BE ABLE TO READ FROM YOU AGAIN IN THE FUTURE..