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TOMORROW – Chapter 11
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“My place now is here Shane, with Nicole and Alonso. They are my family; they make me happy and I want to be with them. That’s the right thing to do.”
“No, Carmen your place is with me. We love each other. We can try again I know we….”
“Stop it Shane. There’s no tomorrow for us anymore can’t you see? That special something is gone, and there’s nothing we can do to bring it back. I’m sorry.”
Shane approaches Carmen. “No Carmen that’s not true, please we…”
“She made her choice now leave her alone” Nicole interrupts Shane. She then steps inside leaving the door wide open.
Shane looks at Carmen waiting for her to say something.
“Please Shane… just go” Carmen says looking at her.
That’s all Shane needed to hear. She immediately composes herself and leaves the office, stopping briefly at the door to look at Carmen before disappearing.
Carmen sits in the chair looking down, letting the tears she was holding fall freely.
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“…and this one is at Alice’s birthday party last year, we threw her a huge party. We were trying to make up for previous one… we were totally involved in our own things that we forgot” Shane admits embarrassed “…but the last one, she loved it! It was wild,” she said lost in the memory of that night.
Her mother smiles weakly through the big tube now covering her face, “You’ve got a great family, hon.” she mumbles.
“Yeah I know. They’re great. They took me into their circle, I really don’t know why. They didn’t care about my past; they just accepted me for who I was. They love me and I love them, too. We are more than family now.” Shane says with sparkling eyes.
“I know now that you are going to be ok. They’ll be there to help you. You won’t be alone… ever, sweetie” her mother says softly as she takes Shane’s hand.
“Hey, that’s enough slide shows for today. You need some rest. I’ll continue with more pictures tomorrow.”
The woman’s eyes begin to water at the sound of that last word. She then slowly removes her oxygen mask.
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Again somehow I have missed your chapters, the last three are effing awesome..soooo much emotion,so want Carm to come back to Shane.
Hey i’ve been reading this story and have to tell you i loved it really… i dont know if you are reading my last one but its like 5 years later but i do mention shane at somepoint before the 5 years, goes to look for Carmen and i cant help to think something like this musta happen… lol anyways um loving it! keep it up
Poor Shane! Only one chapter left *cries*. Carmen is obviously still in love with Shane so I hope she won’t stay with Nicole!!!!
Oh, man. Shane’s in a REALLY bad place now. No tomorrow to look forward to. :( Damn, I need to know what’s going to happen with these two. Update soon, pretty please. (yeah, someone telling a Latin girl what to do? ¡Jamás! …unless that ‘someone’ happens to be mami, because no matter how old that Latin girl is, she’s always gotta listen to her momma.)
Is Carmen really thinking her home is there? I cant see Sharmen’s TOMORROW right now and it makes me sad. Hope you can show the way to Sharmen’s future together. Thanks.