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Who Do You Want?
“Okay honey, well we should be back by 6 or 7, so it’d be nice if you could cook dinner by the time we get back. You know how stressed out I am with all my wedding plans, it’s not as though you’re busy.
Look I have to go. My parents are waiting in the car for me….” Tonya gave her orders to Dana before kissing her on the cheek and heading out of the front door.
“Okay, see you later.” Dana said, rolling her eyes to the ceiling with frustration.
“Why don’t you ever stand up for yourself Dane?” Alice said. “You shouldn’t let her get away with speaking to you like that. You deserve so much more.”
“Really, Al? Who do you think I deserve? It seems to me that I can’t hold on to anyone. Look at my track record? Kinda speaks for itself wouldn’t you say? I totally fucked up with Lara, I thought we were meant to be together, and that blew up in my face. I didn’t deserve her. She made me so happy. I never thought anyone would make me feel like she did. And then….”
Alice looked down to the floor. She could feel the blood coursing through her. When did Dana start making her feel this way? She couldn’t pinpoint the moment when her feelings toward her had escalated from being just a friend to her wanting her a lover. She was all Alice ever thought about these days. First thing in the morning and last thing at night. Dana was on Alice’s mind and in her heart all of the time.
Perhaps it was about time she told Dana how she feeling? She can’t let her go ahead and marry Tonya without laying out her cards on the table. Even if Dana didn’t feel the same way, she would know she at least tried.
“Alice? Are you okay? You seem miles away?”
“There’s something I’ve been meaning to tell you Dane. That night when I showed up at 4am? It wasn’t a stunt or a trick. When I kissed you, I wanted to, for me. I’d like to say I’m sorry for messing with your head, but I’d be lying. I’m not sorry, for anything. I love you and I think you love me too. I’d like to know if you would consider giving us a chance? I know we’re best friends and all, but, I need you so much. I want you by my side every day. You’re all I want Dana.”
Alice’s eyes filled with tears as she finished her sentence. Her eyes darting back and forth between the grey carpet and Dana’s beautiful blue eyes. Just looking into her eyes made Alice’s knees feel very weak.
“Al…. Come here…”
Dana pulled Alice toward her and the two began kissing fiercely. Dana’s hands cupping Alice’s face, lips kissing rapidly. Alice’s placed her hands on Dana’s waist before sliding one of her hands up her back. The touch of Dana’s skin made her tingle in the most private of places. She could feel herself becoming very aroused from kissing Dana alone.
Alice pulled away from the kiss and looked into Dana’s eyes “Who do you want, Dana?”
Alice took Dana’s hands in her own and lowered her to the floor. There were gifts lying around waiting to be wrapped. The pair shoved rolls of gift-wrap out of the way and pushed threw the gifts to the other side of the room.
They couldn’t hold it in any longer. Alice looked intently at Dana, breathing heavily. She pushed Dana to the floor and started kissing her passionately. Their lips burning, not able to get enough. In the frenzied locking of lips, their tongues met. Their kissing hungry and erotic yet full of passion.
Alice started to kiss across Dana’s jaw, moving towards her ear. In between little bites and licks she whispered in Dana’s ear “I love you.” Before planting small kisses down her neck. Alice was in heaven. Dana tasted even better than she’d ever imagined.
Her hands finding the bottom of Dana’s top she yanked it off in one quick movement, revealing a bra-less Dana.
Dana giggled…… “Have you done this before Alice???”
Alice smiled back at the brunette. Not content with a semi-naked Dana, she started to undo her belt buckle and her jeans. At the same time Dana started to undress Alice. Neither one wanting to wait a moment longer than necessary.
They both lay on the floor, naked, looking at each other. Alice took Dana’s hand and began kissing it softly before sucking her fingers one by one. She gently kissed up Dana’s arm, up to her shoulder. Alice was in awe of Dana’s body, bronzed and toned, a goddess. Her goddess.
As she moved lower she could see how beautiful her ***** were. Perfectly formed and her nipples screaming out to be kissed. She allowed her mouth to wander freely, circling her nipples, gently biting and swirling her tongue around each nipple in turn. Dana let out a loud moan that encouraged Alice even further. She ran her fingers around Dana’s nipples, feeling them grow harder under her touch. She could tell the brunette was enjoying every touch.
Alice worked her way down Dana’s navel, kissing and licking, savouring every inch of this amazing woman who lay before her. She was getting closer to Heaven’s gate and was getting more and more aroused with each passing moment. Desperate to touch her and taste her.
She could see Dana’s wetness, confiming that Dana wanted Alice just as much. Alice ran her tongue around Dana’s *****, slowly at first, but then picking up the pace. Dana’s panting was like music in Alice’s ears. She could feel Dana’s hands on the back of her head, trying to push Alice as closely into her as possible. Alice ran her fingers over Dana’s mound watching it grown harder and wetter than before. She moved her head back over her and gently licked her mound before sliding her tongue inside of the brunette. She could feel Dana’s muscles tightening around her, her breathing becoming more and more rapid with each moment. But she wanted to see Dana come. She quickly moved back up onto her lover. Their erect nipples grazing against each others as Alice slid her fingers into Dana. She pressed her lips firmly against Dana’s and watched her face and she felt her ***** building up inside of her. Dana raked her nails down Alice’s back as she felt herself coming as she’d never come before.
Dana came so hard she thought her heart was going to explode. She kept coming, a feeling she’d never experienced before…..Just as she thought her ***** had ended, she would feel another one sweep over her body. Surely this must be a world record? Her groin felt as though it was on fire.
As their clammy bodies rubbed up and down against each other, limbs entwined. Lips locked. Each completely engulfing the other, never wanting this moment to end…..
Their love-making went on for hours, before they collapsed in each other’s arms.
Both breathless and exhausted yet beaming with happiness and joy.
Whispering to Alice “I want you Alice Pieszecki, and only you. When Tonya comes back I’ll tell her the truth.”
They very slowly, dressed. In between kisses. They wrapped a few gifts when they heard a key in the door. It was Tonya, back early from her day out.
Dana looked at Alice, then took a deep breath.
“Tonya, there’s somethng I have to tell you…”
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You no most of this story came directly from the episode you just made a few changes. It just felt like I was watching over again only I was reading it instead.
Very hawt!
I hope Dana doesn’t cave in and not tell Tonya.
Update ASAP!
What a coming home story — hot!
Great story :oD please continue!!
Holy Cow…I am in love with a new power couple. Let’s finally get some happiness out of all the misery on TLW. Look at what we’ve been left with…Tim, Jenny, Marina…Marina, Fran…Bette, Tina…Shane, Cherie..no body won in the first season. Good for you…that was totally HOT!
please continue