Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
Ze penis, ze pussy, ze baby?
Login to add story to favorites
(0 votes, average: 0.00 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
The first scene is from S1 pilot. The argument we didn’t see between B&T. This is where Tina was upset that Bette was joking about Jean-Paul.
*******
Shane: (laughing) You can’t be serious!
Tina: Mm-hmm.
Alice: (laughing) Ze penis, ze pussy, ze baby?
Bette: (wiping tears) Oh, god, I swear. C’mon, Tee, it’s funny.
[Tina isn’t laughing.]
Tina: I’m sorry, I don’t find it funny.
Alice: Wow…
[Everyone stops laughing.]
Bette: Try. It’s important to have a sense of humor about these things.
Tina: Oh, well, I guess you’re just going to take care of that for the both of us.
[Bette looks around the table at everyone, then back to Tina.]
Bette: Why are you doing this?
Tina: What, what am I doing?
[Bette gets up and leaves the table. Tina follows her. Everyone turns and watches as they leave.]
*******
Bette gets into the car and Tina follows… but she doesn’t go into the car…
Bette: Please Tee get into the car…
Tina: Forget it… I’m walking…
Bette: Well then I will be following you… so please…
Tina gets in reluctantly…
Tina: I can’t believe you… why would you go and tell them what happened…
Bette: It’s no big deal Tina…
Tina: No big deal… I get my heart ripped out each and every month when I find out I’m NOT pregnant… and you say its no big deal…
Bette: Well I didn’t mean that part of it…
Tina: All I know is that if the rolls were reversed and I told them that story… you would be bitching up a storm… just take me home…
Pulling into their driveway…
Tina gets out and just goes around back and sits by the pool… Bette doesn’t know what to say or do… she realizes she was wrong… and incentive… and most of all stupid…
Bette: Tee… can we talk…
Tina: What you don’t want to continue laughing…
Bette: If you don’t want to talk… fine I’m going in…
Tina: Don’t let the door hit you in the ass…
Bette: You know that’s it… we have to talk…
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
I liked the way you had the scene play out and provided more insight into B&T’s problems. Thanks. Back to reading…
MG,WOW we finally got some insight how they felt and all.they both shouldna listen to each other and work together as a couple.bette needs to more senative with tina feelings.great job!
What can I say Mary? It was a well written chapter. Thanks so much for sharing this on the other site.
Wow, you wrote just like how they would have reacted on the show. Maybe you should write them but with your other story as the back drop.
Ooh…deep! The hurts are so raw here. I have to assume they were not this out of sync earlier in their relationship because otherwise, they never would have made it seven years. A very plausible fill-in to that scene! Great stuff, and it was a privilege “competing” with you and Seahurst!
Well, that went well. No wonder they broke up. Since IC gave them no coping skills, why should you?
Iwas sorta with Tina, Bette should have been more close mouth on what Jean-Paul said. thanks
Iwas sorta with Tina, Bette should have been more close mouth on what Jean-Paul said. thanks
I always wished that the show would have gone deeper on some things. Like this ep that you all just re-wrote. Thanks for sharing it.
WOW!!!! That was good. Well you have them talking thats good. But B&T need to step back and take in what has been said. Then think long and hard about what to do next. Thanks