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why?is it me? – (Chapter: the talk)
*mom friend not doctor
~sorry
*anyways i say that cause i don’t know what else to think..me and ashley have been together for a while now and everything was going fine great actually but lately she’s been well not herself.
~what do you mean not herself
*well for starters she isnt blunt anymore and she doesn’t curse
~isnt that a good thing
*well that’s only the beginning trust me i like those parts
~well then what is it
*she wont touch me in anyway
~umm okay in what why do you mean anyway
*just like that.she ont kiss me.she wont hug me.hold my hand or anything else that includes touching me
~Okay first off i have to ask are you sexually active with her
*she wont touch me
~no like before this
*yeah
~more than once
*yeah
~okay
*why
~just trying to see if maybe that’s why she stopped
*are you implying that im bad in bed
~no im saying it could be the problem but since you said more than once that’s not it
*well i don’t know what to do maybe its me what do you think
~honey its not you
*how can you be so sure it has too be something wrong with me i just don’t wanna lose her i mean shes ashley davies she can have anyone she wants
~what makes you think that
*mom shes a davies and a davies gets whatever they want whether they ask for it or not
~just because she’s rich doesn’t mean girls are throwing themselves at her or that your not good enough
*not only is she rich but shes hot and talented and everything in between she has so many groups if she wanted she could have a different girl every night
~well maybe that’s it maybe she dose have a different girl every night
*well that helps
~no honey I’m not trying to hurt you but from what you said you don’t have a problem she dose it sounds as though she cheated or is still and is feeling guilty about having done so or doing so to were she sees you and cant do it for fear of hurting you worse than she has or is
*you know i thought about the fact that she could have cheated or is and i brushed it away and figured it was me with the problem
~just talk to her don’t do anything rational and if she dose say she is or has don’t get mad and walk away
*so if she is cheating on me you want me too stay with her
~im not saying that im saying listen to what she says let her explain
*okay well is it okay if i go over to her house ill comeback i just want to get this over with
~yah just be home before dark and dont wreak my car
*that was one time mom and the mailbox survived
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well im driving and im not sure if i wanna go through with this im so nervous my hands are shaking i get out of the car and make my way to the door and press the doorbell and wait
she comes to the door out of breath^o its you what are you doing here
*well hey baby i missed you to
^sorry you just caught me off gaurd thats all so what bring you here
*we need to talk
^right now
*yah why are you busy
^yah
*well what are you doing cant it wait
^just some..stuff but i realy got to go
*no we need to talk
^and we will just not right now
*you know i would think that being your girlfreind you could spare a few minutes
^its just that-you know what come in
*wht are you doing that has you so busy"i say walking into her living room
^umm stuff but what did you want to talk about
*im not gonna beat around the bushes and i want the truth"i take a beepbreath"are you cheeting on me
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tell me what you think this was my first ever shared story so here you go
tbc
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so like i hope you all like it if you do like i said nc-17 will be next if i get some comments otherwise youll have to wait awhile be honest i need the critisiszam to improve the first one was hard so i hope the second is better :)
i like itt =] but what about more popping attraction!? idk what that is..make it w.e u want it to be =]
thanks 4 letting me know people still read stuff. you and a few others who replied to that post, and thats why i did write a story!i like this i will try to read the rest of your stories a.s.a.p. i wanted to make sure i read at least one because, i said i would read a story of anyone that responded to that post. i know you’ve written many more, i plan on reading them too soon.good luck with future work,iofi
It´s good jazziejazz! got me interested :) I like it, I´m curious and I can´t wait for the next post. Just one thing, though… Punctuation marks! Plz. I got a bit lost having to read some sentences 2, 3 times. But I got it :)PMS! ASAP!
Hell yeah, keep going! lol I wanna know what’s up with Ashley. Thatw was really good, except…. is english your first language? just curious PMS
Interesting start. Please continue. Write your next chapter. Will review.