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“Stop talking Carmen. Just don’t….say anything to me.”
“Fair enough……We’ve come a long way haven’t we?”
“Yeah…..I guess we have.”
She gets up. Almost on cue. Right on time, target acquired. I grab her hand and pull her to me. No fight on her part. I run both my hands up and down the warm smooth feel of her arms. She lets me. I move to her back and she lets me. I feel her teeth graze my jaw. I let her. I lean my head back a little when her tongue tastes my throat. I run my hands over her breasts. That seemed to react everything as it becomes a dash to the barest of bare, to the tumble on the bed, to her skin on mine, till the impossible contact, the thing of dreams, that sense of completion, if there is such a thing.
Its motion for the emotion. Possession. Mine to take, hers to give. And give and take. When I sit up to meet her lips, she stops rocking and we stay still, the blood in my ears, the watery slush in my head it stops with us, and its just this stillness, that part of her that’s so close and confused, she bites her lips, where is the contact? Her mind though, her eyes they understand for that brief moment it’s all understood. That thing binding blinding us in love it gets it. It wants to understand why? Why do we love each other so?
She leans forward. Lips on mine, body on mine. She kisses me. She looks at me. Some stray tear she can’t stop. It betrays her. Her eyes close and her body presses down, one swift movement. She wants more, she gets more. I kiss her breasts, I move with her motion, and the emotion that follows makes me feel real. Her nails dig in, the little sting, the blood turns red.
Chapter Twenty Two
“Shaney! Shaney stop fucking her and lets go! You got one more test to pass! Move your ass!”
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this is the first (and probably last) time i write a comment..just wanted to say thank you for sharing with us your amazing writing..good luck.
You and your stories will be missed. Thank you.(formerly known as Komakino)
ya, I’m glad to have discovered your master pieces. It’s always sad to bid farewell, but never say never..even though you won’t be writing anymore, will you still be around these forums? Do drop by to visit us or drop a note every now and then. There’s no need to cut all ties is there?
Well blow me down, a happy ending! I didn’t see that coming. Thanks so much for all your writing. All the best!
i guess i’m one of those always lurkin and never sayin n e thng.been readin all your storys since day 1, jus wana say thank you and i really admire ur writin, never been so drawn in by a story b4
noooooooooo god… now what? i feel like if i wounldt be able to listen to justin timberlkae again… without you is going to be so bad around here… i said this before and i will say it again and again… you are the ucking best writer ever!! i dont care that the stories are l word character i mean even thou if it wasnt shane and carmen it would still kick ass! you are he best and you will always be remember here for sure… noone will take your place… i’ve cried laughed in all you stories and they were always a mistery…. but every good thing has an expiration date right? anyways i would love for you to stay but… you do what you need to do! always and for ever you will ave a fan here! and thank you so much for this sory and all of the others…BYE
Hey hey….soooooooo sad to see that this is your last fic….you will be sorely missed. you’re definitely one of my favorite fan fic writers. thanks for letting us into your genius mind and taking us on these awesome sharmen adventures…i loved every second of them…Thanks again…C.
No one creates tension, passion and surprises like New Dawn Fades. Take a hiatus then come back…your fans will be waiting.
WOW! They did it! Can’t believe they found their way back to one another. I kinda had a wee bit of sympathy for Shamus when he died but knew he had to go. I’m not going to try & fight the inevitable, cause one thing I’ve learned about writers is that if the passion is gone, let it go cause it’ll only lead to writers block. Your AU stories were incredible & I’m personally glad that you chose Sharmen as the oulet to your fics. I just have one request PLEASE don’t remove any of your stories. I plan on reading them allover again, from start to finish. If you ever have the desire to start writing again you know we’ll all be ecstatic to have you back. Take care & best of luck w/ all future endeavors. You’ll be missed.
Last comments from me: No I will not take my stories down, No I will not be visting the forums, and no this is not a hiatus my writing is done. I’ve done all I can do and I have devoted myself completely to my band and my music, thank you all again for your time. Its been a blast.
Wow. I can’t believe that it’s all over. I loved every word that you have written down and shared with us. I hope that you have a great life. And thank you for sharing your mind with all of us. I love the NIN quote as always. I know I have said that many times before. I will re-read all of your stories, again and again. FUCK FIVE STARS! TEN STARS FOR YOU! lol
I applaud your work, it’s great, I’ve read everything you’ve written and I greatly enjoyed every single one…Good Luck
well, I know I’m ridiculously late in posting this but I’m hoping you’re still checking back every once in awhile. I just wanted to de-robe as long-term lurker (since you asked so nicely and all) and say how much I have enjoyed reading all of your stories. I have been touched by many of them and, perhaps oddly, felt more human after reading all of them. So thanks, you did a good job. And best of luck with all of your future endeavours — you will be missed here but I have no doubt will find new successes (and fan clubs!) elsewhere.
really? no more from you? *shocked*…your creative brain is fantastic, and you should use it wherever you wish to use it. best of luck, and i’m saying it again…there had better be some attempts (if there haven’t been already) write ‘out there’ in published form of some kind or other…perhaps your own website? something that will benefit you a bit more, and allow your creative brilliance to flourish. best of luck:)
I have followed all of your stories and all I want to say is, thank you and best to you in whatever endevours you choose to do.
wow, thanks for the happy ending!! Thank you for all your wonderful stories too! Good luck to whatever you decided to do!! All the best!
Damn!! It’s amazing how much every fic you wrote touched me deep.. they made me angry, sad and happy, all at the same time and that’s why I always loved the way you write.. really. Your fic ‘The line begins to blur’ was the first one I’ve ever ever read in my life and I was hooked to your style from minute one. I think (I’m not sure) that you had already written everytinhg up until ‘Missing’ when I started reading.. man, I couldn’t stop.. all I did all day was read, read and read. Thank you so much for it. I’ll take you and your stories forever with me.. Thanks again. =D Take care of yourself and I really hope life treats you well, NDF. Like many hav already said: You’ll be missed.