Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
Don’t fall for me
Story written on March 10, 2011 by kins40.
"Don’t fall for me, I may not be the one. I want to please you, satisfy you and protect you but the last thing I want to do is hurt you so don’t fall for me. Don’t think of me as selfish or cowardly, just don’t fall for me. It may not be wise but I don’t want to let you down, the very thought of it horrifies me, so ….please……don’t fall for me!"
I walk into the Club, a dusky, stuffy, dank little nightclub off the beaten path. As I pass the front door I can hear the somnolent buzz of the neon sign out front, providing a backdrop for the clinking of glasses and drone-like chatter of hundred of best friends and ex lovers.
As I enter the joint, the intermingled smells of smoke, spilled beer and too many people instantly assault my nostrils as I inhale deeply. I push my body through the pulsating throng. Finally finding my way to an empty barstool in the corner, I catch a few glances coming my direction and shake my head and smile downward. "May be easier than I thought!"
I motion to the bartender…"Gin…and Tonic" I mouth. He nods and melts away into the cries of a hundred other thirsty patrons.
My eyes adjust to the dim surroundings, tomblike and womblike at the same time. Bright spots of neon beer signs on the wall stand out, illuminating the faces and cleavage and mohawks of the crowd, while others disappear into the contrasting blackness. "How many of these people have I met before? How many would make love tonight?" I wonder.
My gin and tonic slides in front of me, and the bartender is gone before I can even look up to mouth the words "Thanks". "Wouldn’t have mattered anyway" I muse as it is clearly understood that one speaks of gratitude with cash, not words.
I take my first sip of the simple mixture, cold and icy, slightly sweet and tangy against my lips. I hold the drink in my mouth for just a moment and let my tongue play with the ice and gin and slip of lime pulp, it almost feels like a kiss.
I set my glass back down again and look on at the scene around me.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


(36 votes, average: 4.81 out of 5)
You’re incredible. Please keep your writing, it is also a vicil read their stories.
So glad your back…as usual. brilliant writing…hope you post again soon :D
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
“Don’t fall for me…” because for me it is already too late, “I have fallen for you!” – nice ending :)
That was lovely. Really enjoyed it, hate to see it end. Wish you could continue it, the story would be very interesting to see how their love develops and if Tina does indeed fall for Bette, which we hope she would. At any rate, thanks for sharing. Come back soon with more for us.
Your writing is brilliant! Now I think I’m gonna read At first sight because I loved this! Thank you :D
beautiful this was. Beautiful.
Another hit! Thanks for sharing and please come back with another one asap.:)
That was delightful, I loved every word.
Wow, you can write. Please continue to post more stories. I’m a fan.
So Beautifully written. I felt like I was watching this scene take place. Please continue to write.
What a beautiful encounter! Please continue writing. I’ll write as many nice comments you’d like just to keep you writing.
Amazing story.
Thanks for the beautiful story :D
Yay! So glad you are back and we really, REALLY, need more of your stories. You are just too good to not share your talent with us! PLEASE??!!
You have incredible talent and understand our girls well; thank you more please
So beautiful..Yes Bette convince Tina..But I know, just like you she had fallen too.
That was just a beautifully written story. Thank you.
Wonderful!!!
Amazing.Thank you.
Wow… You rocks! :-)) sweet ending, and it’s so cute that somehow Bette is being the one who admit of her fall afterwards
I have to say I truly loved this story. And for the fact that I was slightly confused as to why Bette didn’t want Tina to fall for her. But when I got to the end I realized…. It was sweet and capture a lot of what happens when you meet someone you know you have this instant connection to. I believe in falling for someone almost as simultaneously as love at first sight. Great story would have loved more. Great writing as always. Caramel
You do have a way with words my dear.
That was awesome and beautiful, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Wow. Very nice, very sensual. I’ve fallen for the fic.
oh dear that was marvellous How can we not fall. ;)
Amazing story!
What a treat to see you back! I just love your writing style and could feel the entire encounter. Even though I’d love to see the story continue, the ending was perfect.
That was beautiful. Thank you!
So beautiful! Thank you for writing another story for us.
BEAUTIFUL!!!
beautiful!! the dancing made me think about season 5 of the L word when Bette and Tina danced to “Walk on By” at the lez girls wrap party, and how they kiss and touch each other with little whispers in between…love it!!!