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Don’t fall for me
Story written on March 10, 2011 by kins40.
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"Spend the night with me" I whisper to her.
The cab comes to a halt and we get off in front of my house. As the car speeds off in the night again, I take Tina’s hand and lead her to my front door. She trails somewhat behind me a bit but follows me in anyway.
The heat of the summer night is stifling, there is no air. The night sky suddenly brightens up in a magical display of thunder and lighting. Giant forks of light illuminate the sky one after the other closely followed by the low rumblings of thunder. Mother nature is groaning.
We enter the house and make our way to the pool deck. I do not want to rush her, the night is young.
We settle side by side on a double lounger to watch the show. The sky is alive with the multicoloured electrical display. The loud clapping of thunder makes Tina jump and I offer a reassuring embrace by welcoming her in my arms. We lay there in the dark for while, the entire house is quiet.
I turn my head towards her. She is so close.
"I want to touch you" I begin. I touch my hand to her hairline and stroke her hair back. I feel her breath drift warmly over my face. I inch closer to her turning my body into hers. I lift my leg slightly to place my knee in between her legs.
Tina lets out a small breath and I feel her body tremble.
"Are you okay?" I ask softly.
"Bette ….. I ….I need to tell you something" she begins in her usual shy manner "you .. You are my first…. I mean ..I’ve …I’ve never slept with a woman before!"
Her confession takes me back a little but it explains the shyness she has demonstrated most of the night.
"I don’t want to do anything that could upset you, Tina, we can stop if you want."
"No no no…I’m okay, I am just very exited by you" she replies, "I don’t want to stop, I’ve thought about this happening for a very long time."
I feel her trembling even more as she utters her words.
I feel so weak wanting her that I accept her explanation. My kisses fall all over her face and my free hand begins to explore her body. I receive her caresses with a kind of frozen ecstasy.
When my hand reach her breasts her intake of breath is nearly as loud as the thunder above our head. I move my face to hers and our lips touch so gently and so sweetly. I let my hand travel downwards between her legs, touching her over her clothing and discover how much she wants this to happen.
I whisper to her that we should go to bed and resume this in a softer place. It proves difficult to move at first but we make our way almost nervously to where we know there is no turning back.
When we reach the bedroom, we pause for an awkward minute. I hold out my arms and Tina instantly walk into them. We begin to kiss as I move her to the bed and lay her down gently. I lay on top of her warm soft body and hold her face cherishingly and kiss her deeply while her hands caress me all over. Sweet words soon begin to emerge from her lips in the most erotic language display I have ever heard.
This night promises to be special as I set to share with Tina the ways of sapphic raptures, but I am just not ready for one thing.
When our bodies finally separate, Tina falls asleep. I look on at her beautiful face. Sleep does not reach me though as I realise that an earth shattering event has just happened in my life. Natural and right. I look at her still and whisper in her hair, "Don’t fall for me…" because for me it is already too late, "I have fallen for you!"
The End
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You’re incredible. Please keep your writing, it is also a vicil read their stories.
So glad your back…as usual. brilliant writing…hope you post again soon :D
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
“Don’t fall for me…” because for me it is already too late, “I have fallen for you!” – nice ending :)
That was lovely. Really enjoyed it, hate to see it end. Wish you could continue it, the story would be very interesting to see how their love develops and if Tina does indeed fall for Bette, which we hope she would. At any rate, thanks for sharing. Come back soon with more for us.
Your writing is brilliant! Now I think I’m gonna read At first sight because I loved this! Thank you :D
beautiful this was. Beautiful.
Another hit! Thanks for sharing and please come back with another one asap.:)
That was delightful, I loved every word.
Wow, you can write. Please continue to post more stories. I’m a fan.
So Beautifully written. I felt like I was watching this scene take place. Please continue to write.
What a beautiful encounter! Please continue writing. I’ll write as many nice comments you’d like just to keep you writing.
Amazing story.
Thanks for the beautiful story :D
Yay! So glad you are back and we really, REALLY, need more of your stories. You are just too good to not share your talent with us! PLEASE??!!
You have incredible talent and understand our girls well; thank you more please
So beautiful..Yes Bette convince Tina..But I know, just like you she had fallen too.
That was just a beautifully written story. Thank you.
Wonderful!!!
Amazing.Thank you.
Wow… You rocks! :-)) sweet ending, and it’s so cute that somehow Bette is being the one who admit of her fall afterwards
I have to say I truly loved this story. And for the fact that I was slightly confused as to why Bette didn’t want Tina to fall for her. But when I got to the end I realized…. It was sweet and capture a lot of what happens when you meet someone you know you have this instant connection to. I believe in falling for someone almost as simultaneously as love at first sight. Great story would have loved more. Great writing as always. Caramel
You do have a way with words my dear.
That was awesome and beautiful, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Wow. Very nice, very sensual. I’ve fallen for the fic.
oh dear that was marvellous How can we not fall. ;)
Amazing story!
What a treat to see you back! I just love your writing style and could feel the entire encounter. Even though I’d love to see the story continue, the ending was perfect.
That was beautiful. Thank you!
So beautiful! Thank you for writing another story for us.
BEAUTIFUL!!!
beautiful!! the dancing made me think about season 5 of the L word when Bette and Tina danced to “Walk on By” at the lez girls wrap party, and how they kiss and touch each other with little whispers in between…love it!!!