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Fire and Ice Chapter 42
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April 1999
Bloomingdale’s Dressing Room/New York City
"Well…what do you think…?" Tina eyes filled with shy aprehension as she smoothed the dress nervously over her hips.
Bette smiled, shaking her head slowly in wonderment. "That dress looks like it was made for you, T…you look amazing…" Bette’s sincere words complemented the heat that shone beneath her eyes. The sight of Tina instantly ignited a passionate blaze in Bette.
Bette did not stop her eyes from running the length of Tina’s body several times, each time slower than the time before.
Tina’s face grew hot as she allowed the brunette to openly devour her with her chocolate eyes…Bette’s palpable desire hitting Tina like a ton of bricks. Seizing the opportunity to regain her slowly waning composure, Tina blurted out the first thing that came to mind. "Thank you…but, um, I think I might like to try a different size…would you mind…?"
Bette shook her head, her eyes still swirling down the blonde’s body. "Not at all…" She began, reluctantly tearing her eyes away from their exploration. "What size should I…"
"Six." Tina finished Bette’s question with the intended answer. She had to sit down.
"Okay…six." Bette repeated, lingering in the doorway a moment longer. She quickly soaked in the blonde’s frame one last time before leaving to fulfill Tina’s request.
Tina exhaled as she slipped back behind the dressing curtain, her ability to think straight demolished. She eased herself onto the small red ottoman, her body heavy with endorphines. She caught herself in the mirror, watching the flush of her emotions tint her cheeks. Bette allowed Tina to see herself in such a different way…and she liked what she saw staring back at her. Bette made her feel so sexy…so desirable. Never before had someone elicited such a reaction out of her…the way she felt about Bette was clearly written all over her face…
Tina snapped to as Bette’s soft voice filled the dressing corridor. "Tina…they didn’t have the size six in that dress…but…I brought something else…" The brunette began hesitantly, maintaining her position behind the velvet curtain. Her arm slowly entered the soft barrier, offering Tina the garmet.
Tina smiled as the black dress parted the curtains, the brunette’s arm gently swaying the dress from side to side.
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dammmmmmm girl… i’ll say it agin… your killing me and all of us… and we are loving every bit if it… ok get tina dressed and them on their way to the hotel… the fire is getting out of control… it needs to be put out and restarted again and again… PPS
Love this story…I love being teased!
Hahahaha…I knew that a sales person would say something to them when they were in there…they always do. I’m glad that B&T’s first time is not in a change room…I want their passion to have lots of room and the decor to be great. The first time has to be so romantic after all this build up for them. Fantastic update Fire!
Holy frickin’ hell, that was beyond the tease! As excrutiating as this torturously slow build-up is, I am loving every word of it. The last line was just perfect!
Hurry up and buy that dress, then get to the hotel!!! PPS
Damn I hate those pesky sale people! I’m sure these two could start a real fire if they don’t get some relief soon…hint hint queen tease! Love it and can’t wait for more! PPS:)
Teasing, teasing, and more teasing! Bette and Tina are going to burn the Waldorf down when they actually get a few moments uninterupted.
oh my hell you are a tease!!!! lmao …..BETTE AND TINA NEED IT BAD WOMAN!!!!
They are so hot!
You know, firestarter, the more you tease, the more you’re building up the anticipation for their eventual and inevitable tryst in bed. I don’t know how long or how many chapters it will take *the story* to get there but take pity on these hapless and in-heat ladies, firestarter! They’re on fire and at some point you’ve got to intervene and give *the story* a nudge in the right direction, don’t hold back and lay off the teasing for a chapter or two and give these ladies some relief just for once. Thanks for this update, firestarter. Hope all is well in your life. :>
damn…trust that sales person to intervene…U r so bad!!!! pps
If the clerk had not spoken to them they would have gone too far and tossed out of the store w/o a dress for Tina. That could have been really bad for them.
I knew they would be busted in the dressing room. damned salesperson! I guess its good she did interrupt or they may have been naked after a while. great post.
LOOOOOVE this story – love it. I am however affraid that one or both of them will soon implode or just plain suffer from a premature ejaculation. Some thing I am kind of hoping for just for the entertainment value alone. You do what feels right and that is all anyone can ask of you as long as you keep posting:-)
PPS!!!
That was “sigh” god you are so good, that salesperson should knew better and leave these women alone, there is so much passion, intensity and love, it makes everything more exciting, i love how they interact with each other and how comfortable they are with each other. I can’t wait to read what’s going to happen next, I hope you don’t cut this passion short. Thank you so much honey, and we totally missed you, so don’t be long in posting another chapter. Love
OMG !! That’s so hot …And this fvucking sales woman really had to come right at this moment !!! :-))) PPS !! It’s too good !
OMG,lol got to love the sales clerk!! if they keep going like this they will never get tina anyclothes! HAHA :)PPS
TEASE!!!!!
ThankGod for the saleslady, Can’t you hear Tina screaming Bettes name and It echoing throughout the store. Wow
Wow hot, hot, hot! They need to buy a dress and hurry back to the hotel. PPS
I haven’t been strung along like this with a Tibette beginning in such a long time….the suspense is killing me, but I’m not sure I want this to stop just yet. PPS
Goddess! Yesterday was like the longest day ever, which out your posts i just wandered aimlessly through my day. Then this morning came and with it renewed hope, and a new chappy :) . I still haven’t caught my breath, your writing, and your B&T so move me. I love the draw out, I trust you and the two of them to loose control completely any moment…. It will continue to melt all of us and our anxious hearts when they do. ;) PPS
firestarter…it is all ready hot enough here in the midwest..then you come along and just tease and tease. These two are going to spontaniously explode if you don’t get them to that hotel soon…pps