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Fire and Ice Chapter 43
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April 1999
Bloomingdales/New York City
"I think maybe we should get going…" Bette began, breaking through the mildly awkward silence that followed their interrupted interlude.
"Yeah…" Tina breathed, brushing the slightly dishevled blonde hair from her shoulders. "I think maybe you’re right…" Her heart still pound heavy in her chest from the brief but scorching encounter she had just shared with the brunette.
Bette looked down briefly, the state of her arosal somewhat subsiding as she took long, lucid breaths. She had to get Tina alone…someplace where there would be absolutely no interruptions…
"But…I’d like to try this on first…if you don’t mind…" The blonde began, causing the brunette to look up.
"Oh. Sure…I don’t mind at all…" Bette shook her head out of the clouds but continued to remain steady in the small dressing room.
"Bette…." Tina began, her voice almost a painful plea. "I don’t think I can control myself if…I mean…"
"Right…" The brunette nodded, knowing exactly what Tina meant. She too would lose what little control she did have remaining if she were privy to Tina’s undress much longer. "I’ll just be right outside then. Just…uh….just yell if you need anything…" The brunette flashed a reassuring smile to the blonde as she made her exit, causing Tina to relax in her solitude.
She quickly tried to wrap her head around the moment at hand, finding it hard to concentrate much less try on the dress as her knees continued to lightly shake.
Tina was somewhat thankful that the zipper to this dress was located on the side unlike the previous one that had caused such a stir. She knew she wouldn’t be able to resist if she felt Bette’s hands on her again…she had to have a moment to regain some control…some stability. This was not the place to abandon her senses…though she couldn’t think of anything she would like to do better.
Bette waited anxiously behind the curtain, pacing the length of the lobby area. Part of her couldn’t believe the timing of the saleslady, but the other half of her heart was purely thankful for the interruption. She couldn’t imagine experiencing Tina for the first time in such a public arena.
No… Tina deserved more…she deserved so much more than this. Bette’s heart began to pump fiercely as she contemplated what their first time together would actually be like. Bette smiled as the possibility of a consumate union beginning to take anchor in reality…she knew in her heart that once she and Tina came together fully, there would never be any turning back. Based on their previous brief encounters, the brunette was sure that the real thing would blow her mind completely.
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Ready, are you kidding me. YES||||
I am not a tibetter but I am reading this story, as it is well written. I do think though that it is a little ridiculous to be already on Chapter 43.. with no “resolution” yet.There is a difference between teasing and endless stalling. One thing I do really like about this chapter is that finally your Tina is acting like a real person, and insisting that she take care of herself, buy her own clothes, and reciprocate with Bette, instead of being some passive doll, allowing someone she barely knows to just pour expensive gifts over her and she just smiling and nodding. I do not believe that Bette ever wanted to control anything and everything, but Tina was so passive, and everyone always wanted her to do everything, she was forced to manage some things. I never have felt that she was as controlling as other people think she is, and I never thought she wanted to be. I think that the most romantic and exciting and hottest relationships are those with both women equal and loving and giving to each other. Just my two cents.
wow, i appreciate the honesty caeleigh. i really do. however, i would like to point out that posting anything original on here is hard to do, as the material is limited. please consider this next time before deeming someone eles’ work ‘ridiculous’. Thanks for reading anyway and leaving your thoughts.
You misunderstood me, I didn’t say your work was ridiculous, in fact it is the opposite. I just thought it was a little over the top to be up to 43 chapters already, with no resolution. As far as being original goes, all of your story is original, built off the premise of the two original scenes.I apologize if you misunderstood ne.
firestarter,I just wanted to let you know that I rather enjoy the teasing in this story because it fits. The journey to the finish line, so to speak is sometimes more fun than the ‘end’. i just want to urge you to write your story in your own way. It’s a wonderfully written story. The fact that they have yet to close the deal and I am still very much interested in what happens next, is a testament to your skills!
I am SOOOOOOO ready!!!
I like that you’re taking your time with this. Too much NC17 and no real story gets kind of boring. So write as you will, this is a great story. You’re doing a terrific job.
As much as I look forward to your next chapter, I have loved every sentence of your teasing and flirting. Really a fun read, firestarter!
Will Bette and Tina be able to make it to the event???? The ladies are so into one another it is breathtaking. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I could care less if it’s 43 chappies or 143…I’ll read whatever u write! This story’s fantastic! But ummm, please don’t let us wait until chapter 143 for these gals to get some alone time…
OMG we are all ready ya big tease lol…..Tina…pleeeeeaseee take your woman to bed!!!!!!!!!
that was good!
And the unspoken question posed to readers following this update: Are you ready for the next chapter? And the synonymous answer is: “I am ready. I’m so ready…”
Oh yes ! We are sooooooo ready !!! ;-)PPS !!!
Yeah and I’m so ready to so plz no more teasing!!!! PPS
Fire, I, too, am so ready. If you drag this out much more, you will have to scrape me off the floor. PPS
I’m with Tina. I am SO ready! Thanks for the post. I love the little power struggle. It’s cute.
I’m with tina! So ready… :)PPS
“sigh” yeah we are all ready, I can’t take this anymore, how can they?? it’s been a wonderful journey, and I can’t wait for what’s coming, you are going to be wonderful at it, just write what comes from the heart. thank you so much. Love
yeah i’m so ready too…ooh la la
OMG so am I Tina so am I.
girl…we are so ready too. BUT..I’m sure they don’t have time before they have to get ready for their evening…it is firestarter writing for us. ; )
wow the hot hot hotel where they’ll be alne right with plenty of time to be with each other with no interruptions in closed quarters… I. Cannot. Wait. Let them love. Thanks and PPS. Fire, bring on the hot hot heat :)
We are so ready. Please
And I’m so ready too! lol I think that dress is going to be needed for another night…PPS
Fire, I like the way that you have written this story. It may be 43 chapters however, the story takes place over a very short period of time. I have always thought that having them jump into bed almost as soon as they met was more unrealistic. I like the slow burn that you have created and the anticpation that you have built not only for B&T, but for the reading audience. I’m so excited about your next post!