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New York Minute – chapters 19&20
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New York Minute
Chapter 19
Bette smiled
“You mean it ?”
“Of course I mean it “
“It would a big commitment “ Bette said
“One that in time I am sure that both of us are ready for “
“It would be fantastic “
“Not immediately but I am broody and seeing you with Angelica really has started me thinking about how great you would be with a baby “
Bette sat up and stroked Tina’s face before leaning in to kiss her again. Tina rested her hands either side of Bette’s face to stop the kiss ending – they kissed for several minutes. Finally Tina eased away
“So that’s not a no ?”
“I would love nothing more – but as you say – its early days “
“I know and maybe I should not have brought it up but I did want it to be something that you considered “
“Would you want us to move to a house ?”
Tina shook her head “ Its never crossed my mind – I saw a couple and a baby in the foyer only yesterday – I don’t see why it would be a problem – we have a big garden over there “
Tina gestured towards the Park “ And I don’t think Ms Angie would like to move that far away from the Natural History Musuem or the Park – plus her school is going to be at the other side of the park. “
“It just occurred to me “
“I love this apartment and it is big enough for three of us – so it would certainly be big enough for four of us “
“I would be honoured and touched by having a baby with you Ti – would you want Marcus’s sperm again ?”
“Yes – for the same reasons as we picked him the last time.”
Bette stroked Tina’s hand and kissed it
“I would do everything to be a good parent “
“You already are Bette – she adores you and I adore seeing you with her. You and her in the pool today were a double act in the making – prime target being me “
Bette laughed and rested her head against Tina’s chest. They were both silent for several minutes. Bette looked up
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Ally, You totally overwhelm me with your magestic words. These chapter were just wondrous.First of all Bette and Tina shared another beautiful night. One where Bette was so attentive and caring towards Tina and her needs. This was pure love making.It was great to have them talk about their future together and how best to deal with their past.Second, Tina is such a bad ass. She gave Alice, Jenny and Kit a big tongue lasing for their treatment and behavior to Bette. If Tina can move forward and wants a live for herself and Angie with Bette shouldn’t their friends get over it and support their choices right now.The revelation abotu Jenny stealing Alice’s idea was primo.Good that Kit was also included as her behavior was shocking too.Third, Bette came to Tina’s rescue and planned to geth her lover home as soon as humanly possible. Such adoration. mountains can be moved by a love like their’s.Finally Shane was a genuine pal and helped Tina follow her dream. That is the mark of a true friend. Letting you choose your own destiny and helping you get there.Ally, you do stun me into silence witht the scale of yout talent and imagination.Thank you so much for sharing them both with me.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
This is such a fantastic story, Tina better get her ass as soon as possible back to Bette!!!!
love ya dialogue!
Fantastic chapter AllyE. Tina did the right thing by telling them all off. I am appalled by Kit’s action, and Alice just leaves me wondering about her and why she feels the way she does. Maybe Alice feels a bit of the lash as she also feels that Bette left her for someone as well, Tina. Of course, they had already been broken up when Bette met Tina but I think Alice has always harbored a slight dislike for Bette because of it and jealousy towards Tina, even knowing she had no chance with Bette. We all know Jenny is just crazy and jealous. Kit just leaves me stunned, especially when Bette was just out to her wedding and they seemed to be getting along alright given the circumstances. Glad Tina is going back home to her two loves where she belongs. I can hardly wait for this chapter to continue in New York when she gets back to Bette and Angie. Awesome as usual. Thanks for posting.
WOW!!! Ally, these two chapter’s took my breath away. I am glad Tina let Alice, Jenny and Kit have it. I am glad Shane was there for Tina. Now get Tina’s butt home to her girls. Thank you so much Ally I so love this story. PPVS
It’s so great that Bette is taking care of Tina even from New York. I am shocked at Kit’s behaviour though, whatever happened to family bond? Something strange there. You gotta love Shane!
Kit’s behavior confuses me to no end. Alice and Jenny are just being unreasonable. Thank God that Shane has stepped up to the plate and shown what a real friend is about! Can’t wait for Tina to get home to her family. Thanks for the great update. Please post again soon!
I love this and all your stories! Thank you for writing.
I loved that you added the script twist. While Alice trashing Bette, she needs to be sueing Jenny. I am also surprised by Kit’s reaction. I guess that blood is not always ticker than water. Please check your PM’s.
Great great story…Love reading anything you put out, keep them coming Ally :)
Haven’t read but thanks for the 2 updates Ally!
Awesome update and brilliant story. Thank you so much for this.
Great story.PPS
I so love this story, however the turn has me puzzled. I´m afraid we´re gonna have to need quite a few chapters more to shed some light. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us.
What a great feeling to know that you are love and you are in love too. Ally I know I keep repeating myself but I now lack of words to describe and express the influence your work’s got on me. You’ve got sort of beautiful way with words, it is unbelievable (well I believe it lol) I just love it thanks.