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Daily, together and apart # 15
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Previously
"Tina? Hi!" Bette didn’t give space to Tina to answer. "I would like to invite you to a cookout Sunday. We are arranging a farewell party, so, I figured on a nice lunch outside by the pool." She stopped and commented "With beer …",she completed "…As you can see, very charming and fine!". She allowed herself to chuckle. " It will be fun. Everybody will be here." "Not everybody…" , she added, "Jodi will be among the missing. You can invite your friend, Kate…if you like." Bette tried to neutralize the tone.
Tina only managed to say "Ok, count on me, Bette!
I’ll be there. Do I need to bring something? Wine, beer?
Bette didn’t have time to withhold her mouth. "You and your smile…we’ll, see ya then." Bette hung up fast. On the other end of the line, Tina was smiling.
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Sunday
The day was beautiful; Angelica was happily playing with her aunts at the pool. Today Bette was not cooking. Angus, James and Kit were in charge of the food and drinks. Bette had time to watch Tina move with so intimacy at the house. And Tina could follow Bette’s body dance through the backyard. The ambient was full of laughs and music. Shane brought some trance and house CDs, that was the soundtrack of their happiness.
After the lunch. Tina remembered the reason she was there. The truth was, she didn’t know quite what they were celebrating.
“Al, what are we celebrating today? …Besides us! Tina held Alice’s arm, happily.
“Well,” Alice said without taking the time to choose her words, “Bette is going to sell the house, so she wants to have a great day here, with her family.”
Alice thought that Tina would be happy to be included as family. Nonetheless, Alice saw a painful look on her friend’s face. Tina´s eyes teary at that very moment.
”She’s going to sell the house? Why?” She mumbled.
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Oh my gosh, I LOVED that. So magical and lyrical. Great job :)
that was lovely, and magical, and just all around special. you have a gift.
Hello Braz!!!! Thank you for being so generous with your comments back. You are doing a wonderful job with this story. I am moved by the depth of your creativity, the words you choose, the simile’s and such. You breathe life into each and every word you so eloquently place on paper. I cannot wait to see more of this, as you spin this tale further along. Thanks so very much for adding a brilliant story to the site. Hugs my friend. xoxox
Wow, now all we need is the “KISS”. rain is such a cleansing force, it can wash all the pain away, and open up into a bright sky with a beutiful rainbow,in which all things are possible.
I saw ur post with a big smile and enjoyed every word of it.looking forward to another chapter asap:)
What a fun chapter…great imagery! Makes me want to leave my umbrella at home and enjoy the next summer storm.
Wow Braz! You so eloquently painted the scene….watching it unfold as I read your words and seeing the effect it had on little boo….perfectly written Braz! I couldn’t help but think of some of the words in the song “In Between Poses” by Jen Foster and also the song “So Pure” by Alanis Morissette when the girls were dancing in the rain… (words in “So Pure”…”I love you when you dance when you freestyle in trance – so pure such an expression…” and “In Between Poses”…”When you think no one’s watching, when you’re taken by the moment, when you forget what you’re thinking, and you say what you really feel, when you’re in between poses, when your laughter takes over, that’s when you’re floating with the angels, that’s when you’re floating with the angels…” Thank you for sprouting such sweet feelings Braz…from your pen to my heart.
lovely
What a great chapter. I, too, love dancing in the rain especially when it is warm outside. Very sensual…can’t wait for more…
Rain, rain please wash away jodi and all the pain that Bette and Tina have done to each other. Rain, rain please wipe the slate clean and allow Bette and Tina a new start.
wow love what B whispered in T’s ear…it’s coming…see…naturally!!!! looking 4ward to next post.
God, I always loved rain – something truly poetic about it that gets me each time… So I thank you from the deepest of my heart for this lovely update to your beautiful story, where feelings and emotions are so delightfully mixed with drops of rain and music, drops of love everywhere… Many thanks for this piece of happiness, this rainbow where all the tension you so brilliantly brang in your story until now and all the bittersweet and intense emotions find an inestimable moment of peace and beauty – a so welcomed timelessness… And, well, I cannot help but guess how truly sensitive the person must be, behind the author’s skills, for depicting such rainy poetry. Bravo ! ^_^
probably the best chapter I have read this year I think.AWESOME:-)PPS
This chapter was really great! That part of the music of the kiss , when Bette was singing is beautiful! :DDid you receive my email? I´m having a little problem on sending them! And I hope what I wrote on the email is right! xD Please post more soon :D
WOW!!!! So magical!!!!!! Thanks you I am so loving this story. PPVS
Ignore the frickin’ stars. This story is great!
Rain and rainbows signify love and peace. More soon please
Braz, this was breathless!!!! Having fun in the rain can be VERY fun!!!Thanx for this chappy,babe.talk to ya laterz!!!!
oh Braz, let them go get that pot of gold.Md
That was beautiful adn awesome, love it!