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Daily, together and apart # 15
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“I discovered just now that you’re going to sell the house…” Tina tried in a neutral tone.
“Well, I’m moving first. I bought this cozy house…”
Tina interrupted. “I know…”
Bette looked curiously to her ex lover. “Alice told me”
Bette grinned. “That’s the old Alice!”
Bette took a sip of her beer.
“Hope you didn’t mind, she …” Tina was about to say, when she was interrupted by Bette.
“"No…no! Not at all.” Bette silenced, trying to ease the conversation. “Are you enjoying yourself Tina?
Tina displayed a bright smile. She looked to Bette deep in her eyes. “More than I have in a long, long time…” she breathed.
Bette found her voice, after being lost in Tinas´hazel eyes for some moments, but her words just put more fuel to her fire, “ You can give a dive in the pool if you want, …I mean…” Bette tried but it didn’t work out. “… It’s a beautiful day to swim… and you know…” Bette would love to see Tina’s body, but she didn’t want to seem so desperate.
"“I’ll wait for the sun to descend a little… It’s too early and I’m sooooo white.”, came the answer.
Bette couldn’t help. “You’re perfect.”
Tina smiled “ Oh…Thank you…” She shyly said.
Bette dared her own shyly thoughts. “You’re always welcome.”
She was flirting openly with Tina. She didn’t know if it was the beer, the sun, the moment, she just wanted to.
Boo was beside them laughing and giggling looking at the people around, her aunts, uncles, her mommies. She couldn’t stop clapping her hands. Angie was having an awesome time. She seemed the first to notice there was a drop. Something fresh and liquid. It was water, it was raindrops, but this was still too complex to Angie to understand. She just felt the softness of the drop on her tiny arm. She touched her left arm and it happened again, another fleshing feeling on her right arm. It was raining. It was raining in Los Angeles in the summer.
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Oh my gosh, I LOVED that. So magical and lyrical. Great job :)
that was lovely, and magical, and just all around special. you have a gift.
Hello Braz!!!! Thank you for being so generous with your comments back. You are doing a wonderful job with this story. I am moved by the depth of your creativity, the words you choose, the simile’s and such. You breathe life into each and every word you so eloquently place on paper. I cannot wait to see more of this, as you spin this tale further along. Thanks so very much for adding a brilliant story to the site. Hugs my friend. xoxox
Wow, now all we need is the “KISS”. rain is such a cleansing force, it can wash all the pain away, and open up into a bright sky with a beutiful rainbow,in which all things are possible.
I saw ur post with a big smile and enjoyed every word of it.looking forward to another chapter asap:)
What a fun chapter…great imagery! Makes me want to leave my umbrella at home and enjoy the next summer storm.
Wow Braz! You so eloquently painted the scene….watching it unfold as I read your words and seeing the effect it had on little boo….perfectly written Braz! I couldn’t help but think of some of the words in the song “In Between Poses” by Jen Foster and also the song “So Pure” by Alanis Morissette when the girls were dancing in the rain… (words in “So Pure”…”I love you when you dance when you freestyle in trance – so pure such an expression…” and “In Between Poses”…”When you think no one’s watching, when you’re taken by the moment, when you forget what you’re thinking, and you say what you really feel, when you’re in between poses, when your laughter takes over, that’s when you’re floating with the angels, that’s when you’re floating with the angels…” Thank you for sprouting such sweet feelings Braz…from your pen to my heart.
lovely
What a great chapter. I, too, love dancing in the rain especially when it is warm outside. Very sensual…can’t wait for more…
Rain, rain please wash away jodi and all the pain that Bette and Tina have done to each other. Rain, rain please wipe the slate clean and allow Bette and Tina a new start.
wow love what B whispered in T’s ear…it’s coming…see…naturally!!!! looking 4ward to next post.
God, I always loved rain – something truly poetic about it that gets me each time… So I thank you from the deepest of my heart for this lovely update to your beautiful story, where feelings and emotions are so delightfully mixed with drops of rain and music, drops of love everywhere… Many thanks for this piece of happiness, this rainbow where all the tension you so brilliantly brang in your story until now and all the bittersweet and intense emotions find an inestimable moment of peace and beauty – a so welcomed timelessness… And, well, I cannot help but guess how truly sensitive the person must be, behind the author’s skills, for depicting such rainy poetry. Bravo ! ^_^
probably the best chapter I have read this year I think.AWESOME:-)PPS
This chapter was really great! That part of the music of the kiss , when Bette was singing is beautiful! :DDid you receive my email? I´m having a little problem on sending them! And I hope what I wrote on the email is right! xD Please post more soon :D
WOW!!!! So magical!!!!!! Thanks you I am so loving this story. PPVS
Ignore the frickin’ stars. This story is great!
Rain and rainbows signify love and peace. More soon please
Braz, this was breathless!!!! Having fun in the rain can be VERY fun!!!Thanx for this chappy,babe.talk to ya laterz!!!!
oh Braz, let them go get that pot of gold.Md
That was beautiful adn awesome, love it!