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    The five-point-tongue-technique- Finale

    Previously…

    She grabbed Helena’s head and pushed it away from between her legs and screamed, “Shit! Stop! Fuck! Enough”. Once Helena moved her tongue from its sweet torture, Bette broke out into chills and began shivering uncontrollably. Helena moved up to kiss and hold her but the sensation remained too intense for any bodily contact. Bette pushed Helena away saying, “Don’t touch me.” Her heart raced in her chest. She felt sweaty and near faint.
    “Fuck, Helena, what is happening? What have you done to me?”

    Helena moved up to caress Bette’s face and reassured her. “Baby, settle down. It’s a normal part of the five-point-tongue-technique.”
    “It is normal to feel like I’ve lost all control. It is normal to be paralyzed. Helena what the fuck is this? What have you done? What is happening?”

    As the tears began to flow from Bette’s eyes Helena gently wiped them away to comfort her and whispered, “Yes it is. That’s why I’ve told you in the past you weren’t ready. Let me tell you about it. Just try to relax and realize this is only temporary. The technique and what you are now feeling is about love and trust. We have both of each so just trust me Darling. Okay? Just remember and keep in mind that I love you and I would never do anything to harm you. Just keep telling yourself that and everything will work out fine.”
    “Fuck Helena, this is really freaky. I just don’t…I just can’t…Fuck! I just don’t understand.” Exasperated by the experience and her fear Bette began to reconcile herself to what Helena was telling her and began to relax and accept the state she found herself in. As she studied the reassurance in Helena eyes and face she bit her lip and nodded. “I can’t believe this is happening to me.” With a deep sigh she added, “I can’t understand this. Please just go ahead tell me the story”.
    Helena smiled and gently covered Bette’s face with little kisses. “Years ago I was traveling with Winnie through Costa Rica.”
    “Winnie! Oh God!” interrupted Bette, “I thought it had something to do with some woman named Linda Rosa.”
    Placing a finger over Bette’s lips, Helena reassured, “Shhh. Be patient. We’ll get to her. You see, Winnie and I were doing an eco-tour, bird-watching, spa-testing kind of vacation. We ended up at this small, well off the beaten track resort in the middle of a rain forest called Selva Verde. It was a cute little place along a river in the ancient rain forests of Costa Rica. It was a naturalist and bird watcher’s paradise. Winnie was big into bird watching at that time and I was big into Winnie.”

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    1. Now Squirl, we all know that this is not something that be purchased at the local Walmart and I’m sure you have many readers booking a trip to the rain forrest so tell us, did jr and jr,jr have a good time where ever they went while you were paralyzing Mrs. Squirl? Thank you, Md

    2. Momadukes…the trip to Costa Rica and the rain forest occured years before Jr and Jr came around. Yes–Selva Verde is a real place ans is a real home to the rare sunbitten bird. You just have to think about which couple on that early morning search was us.

    3. This was indeed amazing, and majorly intense. Very well written. I do think though that Helena should have told Bette everything first and let her choose whether she wanted to try it at that time, or to at least know what was going on when it happened. Just my two cents. Write more soon please!

    4. Belena-They do have to get home from the mile high club don’t they. I was 1/2 way through the landing and had some issues. I have to try to retrieve the end of that story and move them on into new dramas.

    5. Caeleigh-I see your point but part of the experience is trusting your partner and letting go. Do you think Bette would have allowed it if she knew how much control she would lose? Would it have been as intense for her? for them? Perhaps that’s what went wrong with Winnie?

    6. Ohhhhhh, Squirl, I think I will not ventue to quess which couple where you. I’ll give you a clue though, not thinking B&H. I have been to the rain forrest and however interesting I thought my visit was, well, I guess it really did’nt compare. I am however planning another trip for Nov. 2009. I’ll watch out for the sunbitten bird. Thank you, Md

    7. Wow. That was awesome. If only there really was such a technique….sigh. I really enjoyed the more in depth telling of the story and how you elaborated on the history of the technique. Thanks for bringing this here to this site. I hope to read more of your writing and possibly new stories.

    8. great story although I can’t say I want to ecperience that technique, I’ll go with what Sky said earlier :)When will you post another chapetr of your other story?

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