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The five-point-tongue-technique- Finale
Bette interrupted, “Now that is something I will never understand.”
Helena shook her head and stared off briefly, “I’m not sure I will understand either.” Collecting her thoughts she shook her head, “But that aside, it was a great place for bird watching and apparently at the river by Selva Verde was a place where you might be able to see views of a rare bird called the sunbitten. Every morning we would get up, don our binoculars and go out looking for this bird watcher’s treat. The grounds were peaceful and lush in the midst of the ancient forest. There were a wide variety of beautiful and exotic plants and flowers. You could easily find parakeets, toucans, hummingbirds, pretty but poisonous frogs. You could hear a variety of birds and the distinct call of the howler monkeys who awakened us every morning with their distinctive calls celebrating the survival of another night.
“By chance, there was another lesbian couple there. A very strikingly beautiful couple. They looked as if they could not get enough of each other. They were totally in love. One morning they came out and walked along the river banks with us searching for the trophy bird. They spotted the sun-bitten bird almost immediately. What the fuck, I thought! There it was in plain view, wings open, showing itself off. We could easily see its famed markings. It was quite striking. They were not impressed at all as it was their first time out looking for this rare bird and somehow voila there it was. Winnie so giddy and nearly had an orgasm. I was happy just to see Winnie happy.
“After breakfast one of the ladies, suggested we go see Linda Rosa for a massage and ‘other’ treatments. Now this is where I got really happy. One of them told me to ask about the five-point-tongue-technique. They giggled and blushed about it. I had no clue what it was but from their reaction I was quite curious. I made the appointment for Winnie and myself. We had to climb up hill from the resort to this lodge hiding in the trees of the rain forest. To our pleasant surprise, Linda was an incredibly beautiful woman. She claimed she was in her mid-60’s but looked no older that late 30’s. Winnie and I were mesmerized by her grace and beauty.”
Bette interrupted, “Did she look like that Lolita woman?”
“Sort of I suppose but much more regal and her eyes were more mature. She asked what treatments we wanted. We asked for massages and facials. As I became more comfortable, I got the courage up and asked about the five-point-tongue-technique. She smiled and began to ask a lot of questions about our relationship. I suppose we lied quite a bit or maybe we just said what we wanted to believe about our relationship.
She proceeded to tell us it was an old but seldom used technique of ultimate sexual pleasure for two people in love. It was developed by the local native people centuries before. Legend had it that there was this man who was quite the ladies lover. He was married and had several ladies all around the area that he was…servicing. His wife became angry and jealous over his constant straying. She found him one day in the bed of his most favorite lover. A heated argument ensued. The lover tried to calm the wife. In the midst of all that anger the wife was somehow captivated by the lover. Before long she joined them in bed. They became a regular threesome. The husband began to stray less since he now had his two favorite ladies in one bed.”
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(67 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
I LOVED IT!!
Now Squirl, we all know that this is not something that be purchased at the local Walmart and I’m sure you have many readers booking a trip to the rain forrest so tell us, did jr and jr,jr have a good time where ever they went while you were paralyzing Mrs. Squirl? Thank you, Md
I so LOVED THIS STORY!!! Thank you
Momadukes…the trip to Costa Rica and the rain forest occured years before Jr and Jr came around. Yes–Selva Verde is a real place ans is a real home to the rare sunbitten bird. You just have to think about which couple on that early morning search was us.
This was indeed amazing, and majorly intense. Very well written. I do think though that Helena should have told Bette everything first and let her choose whether she wanted to try it at that time, or to at least know what was going on when it happened. Just my two cents. Write more soon please!
Belena-They do have to get home from the mile high club don’t they. I was 1/2 way through the landing and had some issues. I have to try to retrieve the end of that story and move them on into new dramas.
Caeleigh-I see your point but part of the experience is trusting your partner and letting go. Do you think Bette would have allowed it if she knew how much control she would lose? Would it have been as intense for her? for them? Perhaps that’s what went wrong with Winnie?
Ohhhhhh, Squirl, I think I will not ventue to quess which couple where you. I’ll give you a clue though, not thinking B&H. I have been to the rain forrest and however interesting I thought my visit was, well, I guess it really did’nt compare. I am however planning another trip for Nov. 2009. I’ll watch out for the sunbitten bird. Thank you, Md
Your storytelling is amazing.
Wow. That was awesome. If only there really was such a technique….sigh. I really enjoyed the more in depth telling of the story and how you elaborated on the history of the technique. Thanks for bringing this here to this site. I hope to read more of your writing and possibly new stories.
WOW!!:)
great story although I can’t say I want to ecperience that technique, I’ll go with what Sky said earlier :)When will you post another chapetr of your other story?