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The Promise
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Chapter 24.66
Bette sat in her office twirling her hair around her finger, starring into space. She was on the phone with a new artist, pretending to listen to their true feelings as to why she should show their life-size statues of American presidents, constructed of used condoms. Finally Bette had enough and quickly put herself out of her misery.
Bette: Yeah but that is just a health risk plain and simple…I know its art…Ill bring it up with the board in the morning…thanks.
She hung up the phone and stood up to stretch. She put on her suit jacket and packed up her things to go. She was calling it a day at seven Oclock. There was no point in staying til eight, when Franklin had already left and so had her attention span.
Bette: James?..JAMES!
James ran in out of breath.
James: Whatever it is, Im sorry…
He held out his hands in caution.
James: In fact, Im sorry for everything Ive ever done…I thought this guy was for real…
Bette: What did you just say?
James: I thought he was an accredited artist…he showed at Mocha, but it turns out he pulled a fast one on them by doing the same song and dance….
Bette: No before that
James raised his eyebrow and stood thinking.
James: I said Im sorry ….for everything I did wrong.
Bette smiled
Bette: Its really that simple isnt it
She ran over and kissed James dead on the lips. James stood speechless with a huge grin.
James: Hey Im sorry for a lot of other things too…
Bette: You may have just saved my life James!
James: How?
Bette: You just made everything painfully easy for me…God it was starring me right in the face!
Bette grabbed her things and ran out the door
James: Since I saved your life, how about a raise!
Bette ran back and popped her head in.
Bette: I guess well see on Monday…itll depend on how Saturday goes.
Bette ran off and headed home, while James jumped up and down like a little girl. Bette arrived home to an empty house. She went to the fridge and grabbed a bottle of water. She walked to the bedroom and sat on the floor by the bed. Bette pulled out her laptop and stared at the screen.
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(37 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
Sorry about the whole show thing, I’m kinda silly and got confused! he he Just ignore me…. anyway, I love your story and can’t wait to see the action plan for Saturday and the reactions! Thanx for a great story and please update again soon!?
*69 hmmm something going on here “wink” anyway.. great post again.. the plot thickens.. oh can’t wait till satruday.. comes.. hurry already.. I can’t wait anymore.. ok I will wait if I have to.. post soon have a great one!
That is alot , I really couldnt begain to tell how many way i love. I just tell them everyday I love you. thanks
Great chapter, J! I’m still loving the story and can’t wait to read the next one. I’m wondering if Alice is gonna blow because of only hearing Shane’s side of the phone convo. Keep on writing!
hey there! everyone needs to stop keepin secrets from each other, but Tina needs to give Bette more credit, she fucked up once and she knows it.. she aint gonna do it again!! Splendid Chapter love!
wow very interesting! and 934 feelings? whoa. Can’t wait for an update :)
Bette is just so in her “Mission Impossible”… She could speak a little with Tina. If Tina was like Bette and do what Bette do (almost with another girl, even she’s a good friend) and speak like that to the phone, what Bette could think ? like Tina maybe ?
I wait with impatience next chapter. This is a very good story and you write it very well.
Oh and why number *69* for Shane ? It’s a little confused here … Or funny ?
the proverbial poo is about to hit the fan! i can’t wait!!!!
That was great. I can’t wait to read about what Tina’s reaction will be. 934+ things to be sorry for is a lot.
WOW!! 934 different feelings is a lot of feelings! Great update!!
Oh i feel a drama coming on!!! post soon and put me and T out of our misery its 5:45pm in London.
Ok this is good and awesome, can’t wait to see on saturday. Post soon, thank you!