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The Promise
Shane:.I know…
Bette: Listen to me….Im sorry, I have no right to tell you what you have to do when Im in my own situation….God…if when we first met I knew wed end up here…I cant believe weve become…I dont know…
Shane: ***** ridiculous…..
Bette: Not to be a damper on the situation, but as far as the truck goes…I think you really do deserve it…and before you interrupt…just hear me out…you need it right now, the old one is fucked so at least drive it around for a few days until the old one is fixed and then you can return it…just… I dont know tell her eventually youll return it.
Shane: but shes so ***** happy right now…
Bette: Yeah I know…
Shane: I dont know If I could do it….
Bette: Its okay…but figure something out…before I end up dropping a motorcycle off at Lather….ha I wish I could just buy you what ever you want….okay I need to finish this…sweet dreams Romeo
Shane: alright…go to bed sugar mama! Night.
Bette stood up and stretched out her body. She wrapped her arms around herself and watched Tina as she lay in the fetal position sleeping in their bed. Bette walked over and placed a kiss on her forehead and another on her lips. She brushed a stray hair from her face and knelt down along side the bed. She whispered into Tinas ear.
Bette: Im sorry Im keeping things from you baby….come Saturday, Shane and I will put an end to this ***** were living in….then we can move on and start a new life for ourselves.
Bette crawled back to the laptop she left on the floor and brought it up to the bed. She sat up in bed beside Tina and typed away with a new inspiration to keep her going. She opened a new file and sat starring at Tina. She sat watching the woman she loved sleep the night away and decided that writing her wrong doings wasnt enough. She had to tell the woman she loved just how deep her love ran.
Darling I want you to listen
I stayed up all night, so I could get this thing right
I dont think theres anythings missing
cause a person like you makes it easy t o do…
Bette smiled to herself. For once her true feelings for Tina flowed like water, and soon she would know just how much she meant to her…now and forever.
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(37 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
Sorry about the whole show thing, I’m kinda silly and got confused! he he Just ignore me…. anyway, I love your story and can’t wait to see the action plan for Saturday and the reactions! Thanx for a great story and please update again soon!?
*69 hmmm something going on here “wink” anyway.. great post again.. the plot thickens.. oh can’t wait till satruday.. comes.. hurry already.. I can’t wait anymore.. ok I will wait if I have to.. post soon have a great one!
That is alot , I really couldnt begain to tell how many way i love. I just tell them everyday I love you. thanks
Great chapter, J! I’m still loving the story and can’t wait to read the next one. I’m wondering if Alice is gonna blow because of only hearing Shane’s side of the phone convo. Keep on writing!
hey there! everyone needs to stop keepin secrets from each other, but Tina needs to give Bette more credit, she fucked up once and she knows it.. she aint gonna do it again!! Splendid Chapter love!
wow very interesting! and 934 feelings? whoa. Can’t wait for an update :)
Bette is just so in her “Mission Impossible”… She could speak a little with Tina. If Tina was like Bette and do what Bette do (almost with another girl, even she’s a good friend) and speak like that to the phone, what Bette could think ? like Tina maybe ?
I wait with impatience next chapter. This is a very good story and you write it very well.
Oh and why number *69* for Shane ? It’s a little confused here … Or funny ?
the proverbial poo is about to hit the fan! i can’t wait!!!!
That was great. I can’t wait to read about what Tina’s reaction will be. 934+ things to be sorry for is a lot.
WOW!! 934 different feelings is a lot of feelings! Great update!!
Oh i feel a drama coming on!!! post soon and put me and T out of our misery its 5:45pm in London.
Ok this is good and awesome, can’t wait to see on saturday. Post soon, thank you!